I've never been done showering, just run out of hot water.
Joel Send a noteboard - 28/11/2009 06:52:41 AM
anyway, i just thought i'd point out how sanderson seems to use "anyway" a little bit too much in this book. i mean, i can see if a character says it in dialogue, but i've seen too many narration lines start this way. anyway, just thought i'd make the observation
...anyway...
...anyway...
or so I'm told....
anyway, i'm trying to make a point, stop raining on my parade...
anyway, you should not use my favorite pithy pet phrases against me anyway
anyway...
You made it too deliciously irresistible. Er, the teasing, not the long showers (just to be clear. ' />) Sorry if it came off as a cheap shot, 'cos I was just having a little fun and meant no harm.
Also recall that until recently the same complaint was often made against Jordan for overuse of many phrases, some quite adroit when first observed. I'm less rather than more concerned by this because it's so eminently preferable to elegant variation (which Wikipedia says has been rechristened "inelegant variation" because the other adjective has lost a negative connotation it once possessed; I like it. ) We may not care for the feel of it, but it's unambiguous and doesn't leave us thinking he's referring to a dozen things just because he refers to the same thing by a dozen names in as many sentences just to avoid repetition. Indeed, parallel constructions are frequently valuable for just this reason.
In a twelve plus volume series with installments averaging well over 700 pages a certain amount of repetition is inevitable. Note that I don't feel obliged to speak of "redundancy" "recurrence" "recidivism" and the like just to prove my vocabulary (read: that thesauruses exist. ) Repetition is repetition and I'll call it such how ever many times required to discuss it.
Perhaps it's not quite the same, but a skirt smoothing mouse could starve on the difference while teaching a fish to fly (I've always liked that second example so much I occasionally use it also. )
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This message last edited by Joel on 28/11/2009 at 07:04:09 AM
sanderson uses "anyway" way too much
27/11/2009 12:01:03 AM
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People who live in glass houses take showers in the basement...
27/11/2009 09:16:30 AM
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does this mean you're done with showering? i always suspected as much
27/11/2009 06:58:59 PM
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I've never been done showering, just run out of hot water.
28/11/2009 06:52:41 AM
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I think there were to many italicized words
27/11/2009 06:19:14 PM
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an author of his supposed talents should not write like a 15 year old
27/11/2009 07:00:39 PM
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Re: an author of his supposed talents should not write like a 15 year old
27/11/2009 08:53:02 PM
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