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Re: "Matrim" and Thom Tedtheman Send a noteboard - 28/10/2009 05:03:41 PM
Did Verin ever call him that before? I don't think she did. That bothered me a little in the book because I didn't recall her calling him anything but Mat. I looked up a few chapters in tGH, and in everything I've read so far she always calls him Mat.

I know this is a minor thing, but it took me out of the story and it would have been easy to look up how she speaks to him.


Edit: while I'm complaining about little things, some stuff about Thom bothered me too. BS's descriptions of things he did were about gleeman in general. Whereas RJ always made a point of writing that Thom was special.

One example was the spying. The way BS wrote it, people always tell all gleeman things and all Thom has to do is listen. Where before, Thom was good at it. Not just lazy and able to hear. It was his thing

Another example is when Joline shoots the fireball at them. Thom moved out of the way of it quickly because he had a gleeman's agility. If RJ had written it, Thom would have moved out of the way fast because he's freakin' Thom!


Its just like I pointed out before. Mat says Homicide instead of Murder. Just go back and look at all the Gholam hysteria, there they use murder like every other paragraph.

Not to mention all the obvious parallels with Moridin, all the death like words, so homicide becomes distracting.

The flaming True Source? Everyone with the power is "the power" or "the one power" when Mat talks or thinks about it.

I really think it was a very well done book, I just found these to be silly mistakes.
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"Matrim" and Thom - 28/10/2009 02:31:57 AM 935 Views
I don't think it's really BS that deserves the 'blame' - 28/10/2009 02:56:32 AM 635 Views
Re: "Matrim" and Thom - 28/10/2009 05:03:41 PM 482 Views
Ya - 28/10/2009 11:16:18 PM 489 Views
Re: "Matrim" and Thom - 29/10/2009 05:22:33 AM 509 Views
I'm going to nitpick anyway - 29/10/2009 05:52:21 AM 518 Views
Re: I'm going to nitpick anyway - 29/10/2009 07:52:24 AM 477 Views
Nitpicking is what we do I think.... - 29/10/2009 08:21:13 AM 512 Views

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