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I'm looking at it again Deadsy Send a noteboard - 13/01/2011 05:33:38 AM
That makes perfect sense then, thanks for clarifying! Will there be a continuation, btw? :P


and it makes sense that you read it the way you did. I put thestuff about helping Caemlyn before I put anything about the Horn. On the other hand it wasn't from his PoV, so I couldn't put his thoughts in it. In the previous PoV I could have mentioned the Horn but I wanted that to be a tiny surprise.


I doubt I'll write more. Trying to put Tuon, Rand, Moiraine, Egwene, and Mat all in the same room sounds scary. I've thought of ways to get them separated to make it less complicated, but then there's the whole issue of Mat being in a hurry about Caemlyn. Stupid trollocs. I guess Olver could arrive and say it's all taken care of :P
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