My only quibble is that it was a little jarring to see Egwene use the word "okay" (I may simply be forgetting Jordan or Sandersons use of it, but it struck me as out of place; I humbly suggest replacing it with "alright", but that's only a suggestion). You wrote both naturally and well, and the result was true to the narrative, suspenseful and riveting. Some of the dramatic tension obviously comes from episodes we've long expected, but that's a mixed blessing; twenty years worth of expectations from millions of readers can be very hard to satisfy, as I'm sure Sanderson would agree. Your version of these events flowed far more credibly and evenly than his Tower of Ghenjei OR Jordans revelations in KoD of how that would unfold. That both of those scenes felt stilted and choppy but these did not speaks volumes about your writing ability. The prospect of Mats reunion with Tuon being preceded by the capture of Moiraine and Thom was completely unexpected, and all the more fascinating for that, yet as unexpected as it was it's perfectly logical within the context of their aid to Mat in retrieving the Horn, which is also reasonable against the Shadows attack on Caemlyn. Moiraine's so noble that even Mat will sacrifice an eye to save her (despite her being Aes Sedai) but Tuon puts a collar around her neck; he really is far too good for her....