I didn't see Masema going down that way. I think that would have done better in KoD then in the Prologue for TGS. Glad to see a major character get whacked, means we're getting into business, but it did seem a bit out of place.
I assume Masema's various internal ramblings were supposed to indicate that Moridin had been running him, since he told him to kill Aybara. Weird ending, all said, and if Moridin was running him, then there is the whole time lag aspect from him being dead till LoC.
I assume Masema's various internal ramblings were supposed to indicate that Moridin had been running him, since he told him to kill Aybara. Weird ending, all said, and if Moridin was running him, then there is the whole time lag aspect from him being dead till LoC.
Masema was definitely my least favorite part. I'm glad he's out of the way, but don't see why it was left over from KoD.
I think Tylee was my favorite PoV.
Did the different sections seem short to you? It seems like we had longer PoVs before. They all ended right when I really wanted to know what was going to happen. I sort of liked that in a way, though.
Hard to say, I think my reader had the whole thing as 28 pages, fullscreen if it makes a difference. It did seem a bit rushed but I couldn't say how.
I can only assume that RJ left out Masema's death because he was toying with using him for something else but decided not to, otherwise that scene would have fit in much better in KoD in the same way Galina's capture did. OR maybe he just didn't want to give away the FS influence, and yeah it could have been Demnadred or some other FS, but I don't see that most of them care enough about killing MAt or Perrin to expend MAsema that way. Who knows? I'd bet on it being Moridin though, none of the others seem to fit the bill.
The intuitive mind is a sacred gift and the rational mind is a faithful servant. We have created a society that honors the servant and has forgotten the gift.
- Albert Einstein
King of Cairhien 20-7-2
Chancellor of the Landsraad, Archduke of Is'Mod
- Albert Einstein
King of Cairhien 20-7-2
Chancellor of the Landsraad, Archduke of Is'Mod
TGS Prologue - your thoughts (part 1) *spoilers*
16/09/2009 04:56:20 AM
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My comments so far
17/09/2009 05:42:58 AM
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So has no one really read it yet or
17/09/2009 06:55:52 AM
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Re: So has no one really read it yet or
17/09/2009 07:00:16 AM
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Slow down the Seanchan invasion maybe?
17/09/2009 07:07:08 AM
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Re: Slow down the Seanchan invasion maybe?
17/09/2009 07:15:35 AM
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Re: Slow down the Seanchan invasion maybe?
17/09/2009 07:18:12 AM
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First move in a full blown assualt.
17/09/2009 09:37:00 PM
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If they leave no survivors, Rand will probably be blamed, thus slowing his plans to make peace.. *NM*
17/09/2009 11:28:02 PM
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Well, spoilers obviously...
17/09/2009 06:59:01 AM
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Maybe it was Demandred.
17/09/2009 07:01:53 AM
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Re: Well, spoilers obviously...
17/09/2009 07:02:34 AM
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Re: Well, spoilers obviously...
17/09/2009 07:09:10 AM
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Demandred
17/09/2009 08:57:11 PM
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Re: Demandred
17/09/2009 09:00:31 PM
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I don't think Shara is an option
17/09/2009 09:10:49 PM
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Goes in with the whole Mat betraying Rand idea
18/09/2009 12:33:09 AM
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Not to metion is might help explain Masema, since he's been around that area for ages. *NM*
18/09/2009 12:19:18 PM
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Faile and Moridin biggest points of interest
17/09/2009 07:16:10 AM
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Re: Faile and Moridin biggest points of interest
17/09/2009 07:23:15 AM
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Cruel and shady?
17/09/2009 07:24:34 AM
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Any idea who in Rand's group leaked the Semi capture, old Dark Friend or new? *NM*
17/09/2009 07:32:22 AM
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How the intelligence war has changed and tables turned. No more ignorant forsaken, but...
17/10/2009 02:22:31 PM
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A few thoughts
17/09/2009 07:31:05 AM
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Re: A few thoughts
17/09/2009 07:53:41 AM
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It was Brilliant. A review. (Horrible spoilers and some quotes!)
17/09/2009 08:02:15 AM
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Re: It was Brilliant. A review. (Horrible spoilers and some quotes!)
17/09/2009 08:13:07 AM
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Ummm... why?
17/09/2009 08:17:59 AM
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I think Min gets toasted
17/09/2009 09:34:35 AM
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Doubt it
18/09/2009 02:15:57 PM
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What about Tam? *NM*
18/09/2009 05:59:38 PM
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Ash'aman?!
17/09/2009 03:51:09 PM
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Moridin's servants are usually Zomoran.
17/09/2009 04:22:16 PM
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But maybe not here... maybe
17/09/2009 04:30:40 PM
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The logistics make it impossible...
17/09/2009 04:36:27 PM
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Some major questions (The prologue has really got me psyched)
17/09/2009 08:27:29 AM
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Re: Some major questions (The prologue has really got me psyched)
18/09/2009 03:04:40 AM
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Forsaken chapter analysis
17/09/2009 04:19:07 PM
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Was it Brandon?
17/09/2009 04:31:07 PM
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Thoughts on Graendal's POV
17/09/2009 07:31:04 PM
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Completely enjoyed it. (Obviously spoilers)
18/09/2009 01:01:54 AM
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Tylee
18/09/2009 05:51:18 AM
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That was my hope.
18/09/2009 06:35:41 AM
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Thought on Mesaana
18/09/2009 01:13:48 AM
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Question. (Or random thought that could become a theory from someone smarter)
18/09/2009 04:40:42 AM
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Re: Question. (Or random thought that could become a theory from someone smarter)
18/09/2009 06:19:32 AM
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