The good thing about personal pronouns is they're widely applicable; it's also the bad thing.
Joel Send a noteboard - 06/12/2010 03:34:36 AM
I don't mean just Rand.
He could say Rand was head and shoulders taller than Moiraine and then 5 pages later say that Perrin (who I'm picturing as 5'10) is head and shoulders taller than Moiraine. (I know nobody thinks in exact heights but sometimes he should have just said "taller" )
He could say Rand was head and shoulders taller than Moiraine and then 5 pages later say that Perrin (who I'm picturing as 5'10) is head and shoulders taller than Moiraine. (I know nobody thinks in exact heights but sometimes he should have just said "taller" )
Now htf was I to know "his" meant "RJ" and not "Rand" in a thread on Rands height? Context, I believe, argues for the latter, so if you want me to read "RJ", yeah, you'll have to let me know. I tend to agree on the rest; I love Jordan, but sometimes he tried a bit too hard to be like Tolkien.
Tokien was famous for long flowery descriptions, but when he wrote a paragraph describing one tree, or leaf, he was trying convey the image and substance of something that didn't actually exist, transmit to people who'd never seen it the atomsphere of a fantasy world that existed nowhere save his head. We've all seen fancy dresses; you don't have to write me a page so I'll have a sense of what it is. Worse, if even the most mundane and familiar rather than strange and magical things get verbose descriptions you face the problem of reconciling all those details, and the more detailed you make it the more time you're going to spend making sure that emerald enameled brass cufflink in the shape of a rose with three thorns doesn't become a lincoln green painted bronze cufflink in the shape of a lily with two leaves by the next book. Worst of all, the only people who'll care will be the ones waiting to bust you on it when one slips by you, because unless it's concealing a poison needle or something a cufflink is unlikely to have any narrative value.
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LoL. Be well, RAFOlk.
This message last edited by Joel on 06/12/2010 at 03:37:17 AM
Rand: Does his red hair make it difficult to imagine him as a hero for some of you too?
05/12/2010 01:06:54 PM
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I think the Norse god Tyr was often portrayed with red-hair
05/12/2010 01:18:28 PM
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Interesting...
05/12/2010 01:23:33 PM
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be careful not to compare greek then to greek now
05/12/2010 06:29:51 PM
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Rand's a FireCrotch - see video
06/12/2010 07:59:00 AM
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Plus Rand is so tall--- that people are constantly staring at his 'fire-crotch' *NM*
06/12/2010 08:40:20 AM
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No.
05/12/2010 02:09:47 PM
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It really is more of a reflection of pop culture than historical parallels where blond=ideal.
06/12/2010 04:36:53 PM
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Horrbile example, but...
05/12/2010 03:27:47 PM
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hilarious I totally remember those books! Never read them, but I worked at a bookstore
05/12/2010 04:35:59 PM
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No, not at all. The only visualization problem I've had with characters are Rand and Lanfear
05/12/2010 06:12:57 PM
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Re: No, not at all. The only visualization problem I've had with characters are Rand and Lanfear
06/12/2010 12:55:58 AM
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his height comparisons were always suspect
06/12/2010 02:57:20 AM
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He's also compared to people with a wide variety of heights.
06/12/2010 03:09:24 AM
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*bonks you on the head*
06/12/2010 03:23:16 AM
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The good thing about personal pronouns is they're widely applicable; it's also the bad thing.
06/12/2010 03:34:36 AM
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The comparison that got me was when they said that Demandred's Johnson was '2nd best' *NM*
06/12/2010 08:41:36 AM
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It's all about proportions, and taste.
06/12/2010 03:17:39 AM
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Gross. All I can think of when you say proportions is Rand's huge dong covered in red pubes
06/12/2010 08:38:31 AM
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What could his hair color possibly have to do with it?
06/12/2010 03:42:24 AM
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Ginger-hate is real... red heads just can't be taken seriously *NM*
06/12/2010 08:37:14 AM
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