I had an issue with the fractured timeline too. Not so much from Egwene (though I probably would have preferred a chunk of her and Rand's stuff at the end of ToM to align with the timeline chronologically; maybe scenes from TGS from new perspective sprinkled throughout the beginning?) but specifically with the way Tam appeared in both Rand and Perrin's arcs. It was odd reading him at both places simultaneously. Distracting and jarring even.
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Totally meant to reply to the main message. Oops.
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Totally meant to reply to the main message. Oops.
This message last edited by taurean on 04/11/2010 at 09:35:11 PM
Pacing was really off. *spoilers*
04/11/2010 09:13:15 PM
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04/11/2010 09:34:33 PM
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It didn't need to be so out - a few chapters shifted would have helped a lot
04/11/2010 10:39:11 PM
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Re: It didn't need to be so out - a few chapters shifted would have helped a lot
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Re: It didn't need to be so out - a few chapters shifted would have helped a lot
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