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what he said LadyLorraine Send a noteboard - 20/12/2009 06:09:33 PM
your friend deserves your honesty. But you totally don't have to phrase it like "it sucks". Constructive criticism, pointing out exactly how he could improve the writing, is the best plan.

If he has a good story and it's worth telling, then there's no reason why he shouldn't be able to work on it to make it worth telling Besides, first drafts are rarely that lovely
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I would like some opinions, please... damookster - 20/12/2009 03:31:49 PM 715 Views
Well, you could.... jh - 20/12/2009 03:52:25 PM 460 Views
Maybe I'm a coward Sareitha Sedai - 20/12/2009 03:57:16 PM 525 Views
kind of like... damookster - 20/12/2009 04:02:25 PM 464 Views
Well Sareitha Sedai - 20/12/2009 04:15:04 PM 532 Views
Be up front with him. Animosity - 20/12/2009 04:13:52 PM 437 Views
I wouldn't tell him it sucks. Mats Gambling Buddy - 20/12/2009 04:14:10 PM 436 Views
Ask him if he wants honesty. The Shrike - 20/12/2009 05:49:49 PM 465 Views
what he said LadyLorraine - 20/12/2009 06:09:33 PM 425 Views
Ah, see.... Camilla - 20/12/2009 06:24:53 PM 453 Views
Who says "no" when you say "do you want me to be honest?" mook isn't an editor, here beetnemesis - 20/12/2009 08:03:02 PM 455 Views
Bullshit. The Shrike - 20/12/2009 08:12:16 PM 441 Views
I didn't object to criticism beetnemesis - 20/12/2009 10:30:39 PM 507 Views
This. Craig - 20/12/2009 10:45:40 PM 434 Views
Tell him that you want to see him succeed as a writer and then... MightyYT - 20/12/2009 06:06:47 PM 394 Views
Could use the critique sandwich. Panorphaeon - 20/12/2009 06:13:31 PM 438 Views
Or just tell him it sucks, then give him an actual sandwich. jiggy - 21/12/2009 10:34:03 AM 451 Views
Perhaps tell him the story has good bones, and you look forward to seeing a future draft. Erith - 20/12/2009 06:56:06 PM 594 Views
Do what my husband did with me. Tashmere - 20/12/2009 08:11:33 PM 473 Views
In general, I agree with the sandwich method, but... Avendesora - 21/12/2009 05:36:54 PM 446 Views
I like your answer. *NM* Tashmere - 22/12/2009 03:25:33 AM 178 Views
My friend, you don't tell him that. Jacob - 22/12/2009 06:41:03 PM 487 Views
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