That's actually how we're taught to write in American high schools...
Lupine Send a noteboard - 14/12/2009 02:39:56 PM
When it comes to intro paragraphs, a lot of the examples have broad "accepted knowledge" statements like the ones here. It's called an attention-getter. The idea is that the substantiation part comes later, when you're trying to prove the less-accepted fact. I know, it's silly. Imo, serious academic writing shouldn't rest on gimmicks, but it's hard to break old habits, and I still find myself doing it on occasion (just wrote a paper on children in The Canterbury Tales, and the intro drove me nuts because I wanted to talk about the old notion of medieval children being mini-adults).
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What do you think of this intro?
14/12/2009 06:14:51 AM
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I'm not a fan of the first two sentences.
14/12/2009 06:42:10 AM
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Well, i know for a fact that he doesn't opening with questions
14/12/2009 07:02:03 AM
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Sentence fragments are unacceptable in technical writing. You need to fix that.
14/12/2009 06:51:05 AM
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I want to stick a wikipedia-style "who?" in there.
14/12/2009 10:53:02 AM
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That's actually how we're taught to write in American high schools...
14/12/2009 02:39:56 PM
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Part of my problem is that he hasn't told me what level this is for.
14/12/2009 03:04:40 PM
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Aye, but it's an intro.
15/12/2009 08:07:38 AM
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References should come at the first mention of whatever it is. *NM*
15/12/2009 08:42:27 AM
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It's simply an introduction, my citations and stuff come in a little later. *NM*
14/12/2009 08:49:15 PM
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I smell a strawman...
15/12/2009 02:25:36 AM
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well it was in response to a prompt which stated people call it the "Golden Age". My hands were tied *NM*
15/12/2009 02:20:54 PM
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Stylistically it needs a lot of work.
15/12/2009 03:28:24 AM
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Hell, with a critique like that I may start putting up my introductory paragraphs. *NM*
15/12/2009 04:37:53 AM
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