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I know neither the book nor the author, so I don't know how bad it is. Nate Send a noteboard - 01/08/2014 06:07:27 PM

But I would in theory defend the use of comma splices so long as the writer knows how to use them to achieve specific stylistic effects, or if they are part of a deliberate style. For example, I'm thinking of stories where the narrative prose is strongly connected to the point-of-view character's thought process, at which point comma splices may be used to indicate the disjointed or madcap nature of run-on thoughts or panic. They have a potential place in dialogue as well, because people don't always speak with exact grammar and typically, at least in my experience, don't speak with semi-colons.

Even if justifiably employed, however, their use should be sparing, and from your description it sounds as though it was in this case anything but. The semi-colon is a noble creature; it should at every rhythmically suitable opportunity be slid through the guts of a sentence, the cold blade of grammar.

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Never in my life...comma splices...gah! - 29/07/2014 10:29:28 PM 3116 Views
I'm quite guilty of overusing them when I write. - 31/07/2014 01:46:10 PM 727 Views
Rothfuss, too - 01/08/2014 05:00:33 PM 608 Views
Never noticed it with Rothfuss *NM* - 01/08/2014 06:27:28 PM 263 Views
I know neither the book nor the author, so I don't know how bad it is. - 01/08/2014 06:07:27 PM 665 Views
It's not a POV thing. That's how he writes. *NM* - 01/08/2014 06:26:50 PM 277 Views
As to how it's possible ... - 01/08/2014 06:57:46 PM 667 Views

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