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Very good start, I thought. Legolas Send a noteboard - 22/08/2013 10:43:23 PM

I'm nearing the end of the book now, so not sure if I'll have much to say about each separate section, but I liked the beginning a lot. The Sinspire and the game they played there is the sort of thing we've come to expect by now, the Gentlemen Bastards at the top of their game - but neatly interrupted by the description of how low Locke had gone before getting there. Although putting that in a flashback did somewhat undermine its potency; I would argue that the structure there is effective in terms of plot and pacing, but not so good for character development. But okay.

Excellent creepy scene in the market place, too, no doubt the best creepy scene in the series so far. Not an entirely new idea to be sure, but well executed, and I dare say not the way in which anyone would have expected the Bondsmagi's resentment to manifest for the first time!

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Reread: Red Seas Under Red Skies by Scott Lynch - 21/08/2013 08:14:07 PM 751 Views
Prologue and Chapters One and Two. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:14:57 PM 271 Views
Very good start, I thought. - 22/08/2013 10:43:23 PM 637 Views
Re: Very good start, I thought. - 22/08/2013 11:05:30 PM 764 Views
Ah, yeah, I'd forgotten about that part. - 22/08/2013 11:18:09 PM 644 Views
Chapters Three and Four. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:15:32 PM 270 Views
And a number of good moments here too. - 22/08/2013 10:58:49 PM 687 Views
Chapters Five and Six. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:16:17 PM 271 Views
Chapters Seven and Eight. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:16:53 PM 278 Views
Chapters Nine and Ten. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:17:43 PM 279 Views
Chapters Eleven and Twelve. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:19:28 PM 287 Views
Chapters Thirteen and Fourteen. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:20:02 PM 285 Views
Chapters Fifteen and Sixteen and Epilogue. *NM* - 21/08/2013 08:20:45 PM 449 Views

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