I haven't ever seen that done. Even in third person POV, you are seeing the scene from a specifc person's eyes. If he wants to carry information from inside another person's head, he needs to "show, not tell." In your example, he'd say "In his excitement, Frank didn't even notice Susan's barely suppressed shudder of disgust."
It just feels lazy or something.
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Third person narrative question
- 23/02/2011 08:21:01 PM
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So it is focalised through different points of view
- 24/02/2011 09:34:34 AM
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Re: So it is focalised through different points of view
- 24/02/2011 02:30:17 PM
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It's sloppy. I can't imagine that the result is good.
- 24/02/2011 05:47:27 PM
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Agreed.
- 24/02/2011 05:51:17 PM
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