It sounds confusing. I've read books that alternate between voices many times, though it usually occurs in different chapters or there is a break in the story. (Diana Gabaldon's Outlander series has around 7 characters that might narrate any chapter. One is first person, the others are third, but it's always clear within a few words who is doing the talking, and doesn't change mid paragraph.)
Formerly Anya of the Yellow Ajah from wotmania
Third person narrative question
23/02/2011 08:21:01 PM
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Re: Third person narrative question
24/02/2011 04:14:34 AM
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So it is focalised through different points of view
24/02/2011 09:34:34 AM
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Re: So it is focalised through different points of view
24/02/2011 02:30:17 PM
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It's sloppy. I can't imagine that the result is good.
24/02/2011 05:47:27 PM
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