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All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah Send a noteboard - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM
The story is there, the neat ideas are there, the characters are pretty good. But there is too much guff.

Cut it down, fix the errors, and it would be very good.
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SURFACE DETAIL by Iain M. Banks - 02/10/2010 12:32:40 AM 5997 Views
That's a scary cover. - 02/10/2010 01:43:12 AM 1425 Views
No! It is pretty! - 02/10/2010 10:28:05 AM 1463 Views
Not saying its a BAD cover. - 02/10/2010 05:47:11 PM 1435 Views
It sounds interesting - 02/10/2010 10:19:43 AM 1742 Views
Re: It sounds interesting - 02/10/2010 10:27:39 AM 1430 Views
Banks seems to be better when writing shorter - 02/10/2010 02:43:22 PM 1455 Views
Ah, I probably should read some of the others, then. - 02/10/2010 04:52:09 PM 1593 Views
All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM 1437 Views

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