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All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah Send a noteboard - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM
The story is there, the neat ideas are there, the characters are pretty good. But there is too much guff.

Cut it down, fix the errors, and it would be very good.
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SURFACE DETAIL by Iain M. Banks Rebekah - 02/10/2010 12:32:40 AM 6013 Views
That's a scary cover. ? - 02/10/2010 01:43:12 AM 1429 Views
No! It is pretty! Rebekah - 02/10/2010 10:28:05 AM 1470 Views
Not saying its a BAD cover. ? - 02/10/2010 05:47:11 PM 1441 Views
It sounds interesting Camilla - 02/10/2010 10:19:43 AM 1745 Views
Re: It sounds interesting Rebekah - 02/10/2010 10:27:39 AM 1436 Views
Banks seems to be better when writing shorter Werthead - 02/10/2010 02:43:22 PM 1464 Views
Ah, I probably should read some of the others, then. Rebekah - 02/10/2010 04:52:09 PM 1597 Views
All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM 1441 Views
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