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All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah Send a noteboard - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM
The story is there, the neat ideas are there, the characters are pretty good. But there is too much guff.

Cut it down, fix the errors, and it would be very good.
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SURFACE DETAIL by Iain M. Banks Rebekah - 02/10/2010 12:32:40 AM 5962 Views
That's a scary cover. ? - 02/10/2010 01:43:12 AM 1406 Views
No! It is pretty! Rebekah - 02/10/2010 10:28:05 AM 1447 Views
Not saying its a BAD cover. ? - 02/10/2010 05:47:11 PM 1419 Views
It sounds interesting Camilla - 02/10/2010 10:19:43 AM 1724 Views
Re: It sounds interesting Rebekah - 02/10/2010 10:27:39 AM 1415 Views
Banks seems to be better when writing shorter Werthead - 02/10/2010 02:43:22 PM 1435 Views
Ah, I probably should read some of the others, then. Rebekah - 02/10/2010 04:52:09 PM 1573 Views
All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM 1417 Views
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