I like the general thought, but it lacks detail. Sometimes the detail isn't even possible, since in many places the author himself just does things that are not necessarily explained like math.

I know that Linda (Thirteenth Depository) has a bit more elaborate thesis on the One Power and how it slows aging, which says pretty much what you said, but in more details and additional explanations of the DO and etc.

Maybe you should post this out there and have a discussion with her.