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I love the idea of a third person involved. Bryce Send a noteboard - 06/12/2009 06:35:51 AM
I have no answer in terms of the Compulsion. Nor can I immediately deduce why Delana would weave it instead. But the whole trail leading to her being found and games within games is more interesting than the plot as it reads now.


I can't believe I'd never pondered that before. With everyone screaming that she's dead, this had honestly never crossed my mind. Now, the real question that we have to ask ourselves is, could Graendal really be smart enough to have another person weave it? I don't know that she's really that clever, but it's something to think about anyway.

I like this idea very much, because it stops everyone from complaining that she'd have to know the exact second he was going to balefire, etc. Cool idea.
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I tend to agree - 06/12/2009 03:46:37 AM 620 Views
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I love the idea of a third person involved. - 06/12/2009 06:35:51 AM 646 Views
Delana!!! - 09/12/2009 08:35:40 PM 554 Views
Ah, so you're proposing that - 06/12/2009 04:29:34 AM 689 Views
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Makes sense. Good points all around. - 06/12/2009 06:37:21 AM 729 Views
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Balefire doesn't work that way... - 06/12/2009 08:06:38 AM 638 Views
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From the author's perspective... - 06/12/2009 11:05:16 AM 708 Views
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She'd have had to ask the right questions to get the right answers. - 07/12/2009 12:44:29 AM 601 Views

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