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gawyn is no more annoying than in other books moondog Send a noteboard - 28/11/2009 12:23:12 AM

What things irritated you in the book? I mean this strictly from a plot or character PoV, not inaccuracies or problems you had with Brandon's writing. Here are mine..

1. The Aes Sedai calling Nynaeve 'child'. It's so ridiculous that a woman who has accomplished so much is still being looked at as an Accepted.

2. Gawyn still not believing anyone that Rand didn't hurt his mother. Gareth was probably the fourth person to try and pursuade him.

3. The absence of Graendal on screen. In some ways this was her book, but she was absent.

4. Having once again heard no news on what Demandred is doing.

5. Bubbles of evil. They get in the way of everything. Go away.

That is all.


we just see a little more of his pig-headedness in this one than before.

the thing that annoyed me the most about this book i've already posted about (the "anyway" post in case you missed it), but as far as characters go, cadsuane came out as more self-righteous and annoying than in previous books imho.

also, only cursory involvement with mat and perrin, and mat's story arc being uncompelling compared to his previous arc in KoD.

and i think most of all, the way the plot was handled so bluntly as if most of the major points were being smashed into your face with a sledgehammer and giving a little too much predictability. when semihrage was freed, did anyone *not* see that the serving woman was going to be semihrage in disguise?
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LOL Agreed on #5, 6 and 10 *NM* - 24/11/2009 04:20:36 PM 528 Views
Lol *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:00:07 AM 375 Views
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Wrong place, ignore *NM* - 24/11/2009 05:28:34 PM 305 Views
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Yes you are right *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:00:28 AM 717 Views
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Oh yes, her also. *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:51:21 AM 298 Views
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Gawyn in general. - 25/11/2009 02:15:06 PM 713 Views
gawyn is no more annoying than in other books - 28/11/2009 12:23:12 AM 649 Views
Finally read it! - 30/11/2009 01:36:19 AM 847 Views
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