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TGS: Bloated or not? cseresz Send a noteboard - 30/10/2009 03:47:16 PM
I've read the first chapter only, so I can't say anything about the whole book, but I don't understand why we need this chapter:


Rand: missing hand, "steel", no harm to women etc. - nothing new

Min: endless concerning, coat etc. - nothing new

Cadsuane: "any queen at court" - almost nothing new: the prisoner doesn't speak

Nynaeve: almost tugging her braid -nothing new

Alivia: "she would help Rand" - Who ever heard of such a thing? :)



In short: 6,500 words for nothing, or rather the book was too slim, so BS had to bloat up to 300,000 words from 220,000. (Many readers mention further "needless" chapters (at least 10-12 chapters).

So, what do you think?
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TGS: Bloated or not? cseresz - 30/10/2009 03:47:16 PM 1163 Views
I think: Kalief - 30/10/2009 03:58:07 PM 858 Views
Re: and I think I completely agree with kalief *NM* mazza3 - 30/10/2009 05:58:36 PM 291 Views
Read all of it... bogotabandit2 - 30/10/2009 09:32:23 PM 753 Views
Re: TGS: Bloated or not? thebestrob - 30/10/2009 04:06:48 PM 668 Views
I think the opposite. Seriana Sedai - 30/10/2009 04:40:54 PM 707 Views
I think first chapters are meant to refamiliarize the reader with the story, not to be action fests. *NM* RandAllThor - 30/10/2009 04:44:22 PM 287 Views
yes, but not as bad kcf - 30/10/2009 04:45:49 PM 885 Views
A few chapters felt unneccessary, but it was mostly fine. beetnemesis - 30/10/2009 07:04:44 PM 700 Views
A Mat chapter can never be a waste Saruto - 30/10/2009 10:30:12 PM 684 Views
It is TheCrownless - 30/10/2009 10:59:01 PM 629 Views
Agreed *NM* Simon - 31/10/2009 12:36:49 AM 257 Views
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