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Re: Indeed... muppet Send a noteboard - 31/01/2013 03:05:44 PM
When you consider that important plot lines like moiraines return, and rand getting the seancan on his side were treated in a half dozen paragraphs, it seems an extravagant one.

The "clever" uses of gateways were tiring in my opinion.

Sandersons constant resort to a light character figuring a novel way to use a function of the power that already had well defined limits was reminiscent of the Harry Potter series.


It was like a poke in the eye each time it happened again and again.

The relationship stuff between Androl and Pevara I have no problem with. But the fact that Androl has effectively booted longstanding characters like Flinn, Narishma, Grady, Neald and even Logain to the sidelines was problematic.

Vanity by the new author is a good way to describe it.


In fairness to Brandon, while I agree with your analysis of the handling of Androl (who is an awful lot like Kelsier if you think about it) and his pet Red, I also think that his side characters are generally WAY more interesting than RJ's rather bland and sometimes cookie-cutter Darkfriends, who seem to be the only characters that get true side plots when RJ is driving ("true" in that they're fairly disconnected from the heroes throughout). Androl is interesting in a way that Narishma really wasn't. You had to infer an awful lot with Narishma to make him cool. If you were dripping with fan theories and fiction, you probably liked him a lot more than someone like me who ingests only what's in the books.

I'd have liked for RJ to have done more of this Sanderson-style sidetracking, because his own sidetracking always seemed annoying and distracting to me. It never seemed to go anywhere, was not really interesting because of how repetitive it was, and more and more I just started internally moaning at the text and looking expectantly along the page for a main character to crop back up.

But I do agree that Androl and Perava got WAY too much screen-time and had an annoying and unnecessary toolbox full of gimmicks.
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So, am I the only one who kind of liked the whole Androl/Pevara plot? - 31/01/2013 02:30:15 PM 2239 Views
It was extremely irritating... - 31/01/2013 02:34:32 PM 1282 Views
Re: It was extremely irritating... - 31/01/2013 02:47:46 PM 1403 Views
It felt like a plot tacked on as a vanity by Sanderson - 31/01/2013 02:49:09 PM 1061 Views
Indeed... - 31/01/2013 02:58:50 PM 1086 Views
Re: Indeed... - 31/01/2013 03:05:44 PM 1196 Views
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I'd say more like Mistborn than Harry Potter *NM* - 01/02/2013 02:53:30 PM 487 Views
No I loved it too. *NM* - 31/01/2013 02:43:31 PM 466 Views
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I could really use an example here - 01/02/2013 02:56:50 PM 943 Views
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Re: He probably didn't have enough time to learn the characters completely - 02/02/2013 04:48:45 PM 1162 Views
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Damn you are on a roll ... Nicely said. *NM* - 03/02/2013 12:46:57 AM 553 Views
Its true, but RJ should get some blame - 05/02/2013 03:56:20 PM 1013 Views
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Not the only one..I really enjoyed reading their story. *NM* - 01/02/2013 02:05:21 PM 537 Views
It was my favourite subplot *NM* - 01/02/2013 02:17:26 PM 726 Views
I really liked this plot-line! *NM* - 03/02/2013 07:23:48 AM 446 Views
I liked it, but that's because... - 10/02/2013 09:14:44 AM 1086 Views

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