He got Nynaeve able to tell stalagmite from stalactite yet he would have us believe the Queen of Andor has never heard what an eclipse is.
One might say all sort of things about Jordan's style, but he was manically consistent with his language usage rules through the series. His blunders in the vein of arabesque, spartan etc. are very few and far between. That often meant heavy prose and the long way around: a big stone teeth coming out of the ground etc., but it didn't throw you out of the world.
Brandon is surprisingly careless with this, for a world builder. He constantly used modern and often fairly technical terms. It's a bit Harriet's fault too, or rather her decision. She said in Q&A she was very light handed with language not to denaturate Brandon's style. But I'm not quite sure it was the right decision. There's a difference between trying to mimic Jordan's prose and following simple constraints like not using words, expressions, turns of phrase and metaphor too out of place in an pre-industrial setting. If it's too much an hinderance while writing, this can easily have been fixed in editing/rewrites.
The funniest thing is that recently Brandon invoked his "many advanced courses" in linguistics to justify some of his decisions, for instance to suddenly shorten established WOT expressions. He decided for e.g. Mat shortened "Blood and Ashes" to "Bloody Ashes" and this trend spread. Over but a few months, through a whole continent, before mass media. Pathetic. "advanced courses in linguistics" indeed!
One might say all sort of things about Jordan's style, but he was manically consistent with his language usage rules through the series. His blunders in the vein of arabesque, spartan etc. are very few and far between. That often meant heavy prose and the long way around: a big stone teeth coming out of the ground etc., but it didn't throw you out of the world.
Brandon is surprisingly careless with this, for a world builder. He constantly used modern and often fairly technical terms. It's a bit Harriet's fault too, or rather her decision. She said in Q&A she was very light handed with language not to denaturate Brandon's style. But I'm not quite sure it was the right decision. There's a difference between trying to mimic Jordan's prose and following simple constraints like not using words, expressions, turns of phrase and metaphor too out of place in an pre-industrial setting. If it's too much an hinderance while writing, this can easily have been fixed in editing/rewrites.
The funniest thing is that recently Brandon invoked his "many advanced courses" in linguistics to justify some of his decisions, for instance to suddenly shorten established WOT expressions. He decided for e.g. Mat shortened "Blood and Ashes" to "Bloody Ashes" and this trend spread. Over but a few months, through a whole continent, before mass media. Pathetic. "advanced courses in linguistics" indeed!
I hated the way "Great Mistress" or "Great Master" became "Great One" among the FS. That's been going for a few books now though. And the Seanchan titles were also altered significantly.
As for the OP it seems we can't even discuss it in this book it was mangled so badly.
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Where to begin....
23/01/2013 05:22:12 AM
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Re: Where to begin....
23/01/2013 01:18:31 PM
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I think Rand and Moridin sword fought because channeling at SG is v dangerous so they minimised it
24/01/2013 12:40:45 AM
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Re: Where to begin....
23/01/2013 04:11:13 PM
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There was a HUGE goldmine of complexity that RJ planted in the story that BS just completely ignored *NM*
23/01/2013 06:35:17 PM
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Seriously, the entire book I was scratching my head wondering why the hell the Channelers
25/01/2013 06:32:26 AM
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Hey John
24/01/2013 04:04:39 PM
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Re: Hey John
24/01/2013 05:45:30 PM
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Yeah, his writing annoys me greatly at times
24/01/2013 06:57:50 PM
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Re: Yeah, his writing annoys me greatly at times
25/01/2013 04:55:54 AM
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I'm as much of a "mainstream" reviewer as a fantasy one these days, so...
25/01/2013 05:16:16 AM
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Re: I'm as much of a "mainstream" reviewer as a fantasy one these days, so...
25/01/2013 08:37:48 PM
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All but remains, for me at least, is a story that isn't as memorable as it could have been
27/01/2013 03:03:59 AM
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Re: All but remains, for me at least, is a story that isn't as memorable as it could have been
28/01/2013 09:26:24 PM
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Perrin growled. Slayer was too quick! Perrin was fast, too. Sooner or later, one of them would..." *NM*
24/01/2013 08:23:12 PM
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At one point he used the word "arabesque" - how can something be that without Arabic culture? *NM*
24/01/2013 09:25:54 PM
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Indeed...
25/01/2013 03:14:22 AM
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What about misuse of titles?
25/01/2013 06:19:16 AM
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He actually said he took "many advanced courses in linguistics"? That makes it even worse.
25/01/2013 02:19:31 PM
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Re: He actually said he took "many advanced courses in linguistics"? That makes it even worse.
25/01/2013 08:53:38 PM
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Well, Brigham Young is the *best* Mormon university out there.
26/01/2013 01:37:16 AM
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Re: Well, Brigham Young is the *best* Mormon university out there.
26/01/2013 03:20:09 PM
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You still Trolling the WoTBoards Larry?
24/01/2013 11:06:14 PM
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Ha! I've mellowed a bit, though!
25/01/2013 04:56:47 AM
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Been there
26/01/2013 09:27:10 PM
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I went to the World's Fair in 1982 with my family - again, small world!
27/01/2013 03:08:27 AM
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Were you the one who came up with "Selene was Mesaana"?
25/01/2013 07:44:01 AM
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