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I wouldn't go so far as to say TOTALLY, but I was not satisfied. HyogaRott Send a noteboard - 14/01/2013 06:04:30 PM
It seemed as though the book spent too much time on WHAT people were doing and not enough on WHY.

For most of the series the reader received a thorough (maybe too much) explanation on why people did things and then a brief display of them doing it (often we were not shown them doing it). In the final book we got very little of the why explained, most of them were revealed by showing what someone else was doing. The result was a book that definitely felt like it was written by someone other than Robert Jordan.

Net result is that certain characters completely lost their payoff. An excellent example is Min who for at least 5 books was built up as the person who would solve the problem of the bore, then NOTHING. If she did, then it happened completely off screen and Rand never gives her any credit. Her entire purpose in the series is suddenly reduced to being Rand's girlfriend and a foreshadowing provider. You can completely delete her character, and for that matter Aviendha, as they no longer serve any useful purpose (they don’t even get to be pregnant with Rand’s kids).

It is the same with many of the secondary characters. Moirane was supposed to be essential to Rand winning, but all she did was place a pause into an argument with Egwene that anyone could have provided. For all we saw in the book, she could have just stayed dead. Other than walking into the bore, she did absolutely NOTHING. Thom would have guarded the bore without her. The bore solution probably came from Min and her but we never saw it. Instead we get chapter after chapter of trolloc killing and Slayer chasing...

The last book fell flat for me. It ended the series, but it was not a grand conclusion.
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Anyone else totally unimpressed? - 09/01/2013 04:58:39 AM 2110 Views
I couldn't disagree more - 09/01/2013 05:32:41 AM 1064 Views
I enjoyed the book as entertainment - 09/01/2013 05:47:22 AM 1000 Views
I found the ongoing Trolloc killing a bit tedious. - 09/01/2013 06:14:25 AM 864 Views
You missed what was being conveyed. *NM* - 18/01/2013 08:16:50 AM 401 Views
Re: I found the ongoing Trolloc killing a bit tedious. - 29/01/2013 11:01:11 AM 765 Views
Re: I found the ongoing Trolloc killing a bit tedious. - 29/01/2013 11:03:36 AM 766 Views
Re: I found the ongoing Trolloc killing a bit tedious. - 29/01/2013 01:47:48 PM 843 Views
I had extremely low expectations, which I guess were sort of met. - 09/01/2013 06:12:05 AM 1094 Views
You don't have to worry about continuations of WoT - 09/01/2013 07:24:55 AM 891 Views
People change their minds... *NM* - 09/01/2013 01:48:33 PM 403 Views
Mine weren't, even with the low expectations - 09/01/2013 05:04:07 PM 1214 Views
I don't remember you being such an arrogant prick years ago on WoTmania - 11/01/2013 05:28:07 AM 902 Views
Pardon, but I don't even recall who you are *NM* - 11/01/2013 08:39:54 AM 470 Views
You are a... - 18/01/2013 08:21:54 AM 855 Views
Uh... - 18/01/2013 12:19:13 PM 882 Views
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Why does any of this matter to you? - 18/01/2013 10:35:18 PM 938 Views
Oh sure... - 19/01/2013 06:43:19 AM 742 Views
No, not quite - 19/01/2013 08:57:47 AM 805 Views
LoL @ Larry - 19/01/2013 09:21:13 PM 724 Views
Ummm.... - 19/01/2013 10:05:30 PM 798 Views
That was a dodge. - 20/01/2013 01:40:59 AM 787 Views
Nah, more like me cutting this short. - 20/01/2013 02:30:28 AM 779 Views
Everyone has their own coping mechanisms. - 20/01/2013 10:09:02 PM 1089 Views
I'm sorry, Trolloc, but I had things to deal with to answer - 22/01/2013 06:36:15 PM 1265 Views
I'm as satisfied as I could possibly be. - 09/01/2013 07:39:35 AM 951 Views
I thought it was fantastic - 09/01/2013 07:46:16 AM 988 Views
My thoughts exactly *NM* - 16/01/2013 06:56:59 PM 353 Views
"Totally unimpressed" would be a hyperbole but... - 09/01/2013 06:53:20 PM 976 Views
It was ok - 10/01/2013 01:09:52 AM 835 Views
It just felt like they needed 3 more books to finish it up - 14/01/2013 03:58:57 AM 789 Views
Yeah... and they had a totally legit reason to do it, too. - 14/01/2013 05:14:21 PM 724 Views
I wouldn't go so far as to say TOTALLY, but I was not satisfied. - 14/01/2013 06:04:30 PM 831 Views
I will say that the battle was well constructed in certain places - 14/01/2013 06:10:54 PM 807 Views
Re: Anyone else totally unimpressed? - 18/01/2013 10:23:22 PM 797 Views

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