I think you may be trying to hard to satisfy all of the various Dreams, Visions etc... - Edit 1
Before modification by darius_sedai at 10/11/2012 01:49:58 AM
in a literal way. But what you outline isn't beyond reason.
Few thoughts ... Where is Fain in all this? The Callandor role also doesn't jive for me given that RJ made a point of telling us that the issues with Callandor where simple manufacturing flaws. Why tell us that only to make said flaw a HUGE piece in defeating the DO. Certainly possible, but it just feels off to me ... And why introduce a new blade in Justice? Also, the way you've mapped this out it doesn't feel like Rand is really the one who defeats the DO. I certainly believe the whole group will be involved on some level, but Rand facing and defeating the DO seems like a mandatory to me ...
Few thoughts ... Where is Fain in all this? The Callandor role also doesn't jive for me given that RJ made a point of telling us that the issues with Callandor where simple manufacturing flaws. Why tell us that only to make said flaw a HUGE piece in defeating the DO. Certainly possible, but it just feels off to me ... And why introduce a new blade in Justice? Also, the way you've mapped this out it doesn't feel like Rand is really the one who defeats the DO. I certainly believe the whole group will be involved on some level, but Rand facing and defeating the DO seems like a mandatory to me ...