While I'm talking about pet peeves, it bothers me when people make excuses for Brandon by saying he's a new author. If I'm remembering correctly, he had five novels published before he started working on WoT. (Elantris, Mistborn series, and Arcatraz). He has since done at least four other books before AMOL. (Warbreaker, WOK, Arcatraz, another)
Yeah, he's definitely not a new author. He's relatively young, but he has seven quite good adult fantasy books under his belt outside of WoT, each of which I personally like better than the Wheel of Time series, but for different reasons (they're different types of stories, and WoT will always have an important place for me).
A better excuse is probably that he's working in someone else's world, dealing with astonishingly high fan expectations and a fan base a dozen times more interested in nitpicking the details of the books (as they did with all of Jordan's as well) than his own fan base, working with an editor (Harriet) who is more personally invested in the story than any other editor he's worked with, probably secretly wanting to get through it so he can return to his own work, and essentially being asked to write fan fiction from notes. There are quite a few things he could have done differently, but there are quite a few things I think he did well, too. I for one have really enjoyed Egwene's arc, Jesus al'Thor, the forging of Perrin's hammer, and even Mat's humour. The little details aren't what they used to be, but I'm enjoying getting a faster-paced end to the series.
P.S. It's actually considered generally poor writing to put adverbs to the way people say things, ie., "Moiraine said coolly" or "Moiraine said acidly" the way you're describing. I don't remember if Jordan actually did it that way, but it's considered generally better to simply use "said" by itself and to let the dialogue or the contextual narration convey the tone. But as with anything, tastes and styles vary.
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If you have to call someone "my friend" three times in a couple of minutes, he isn't.
28/09/2012 11:59:13 AM
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The only people I've ever heard say "my friend" are foreign street vendors
28/09/2012 01:19:00 PM
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Sanderson's handling of character interractions is pathetic....
28/09/2012 06:43:48 PM
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Now see, here I don't fully agree, or at least think it's a matter of taste.
28/09/2012 07:21:09 PM
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Sorry, that's just not true...
28/09/2012 11:33:59 PM
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I posted something very similar at DM. Reposting...
28/09/2012 11:46:07 PM
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This is one of my biggest pet peeves as well
29/09/2012 04:56:53 AM
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There are people who say that?
29/09/2012 05:16:58 AM
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I complained about this regarding the Forsaken chapter
28/09/2012 07:34:25 PM
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I've long since accepted that Sanderson uses inaccurate terms like "powerful"
29/09/2012 05:44:11 AM
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To be fair, the last Moghedian PoV by RJ might have changed her a bit.
29/09/2012 03:27:31 PM
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Yes. The last time it happened to me it ended with the taxi driver fined by the NYPD.
29/09/2012 07:05:26 AM
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The burning question to me, after reading all of the comments above, is this...
29/09/2012 08:50:50 AM
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Piggybacking on someone else's established characters and near-climax-point plot?
29/09/2012 03:04:03 PM
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Both of you disgust me
29/09/2012 04:13:16 PM
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To be fair...
29/09/2012 04:36:52 PM
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True ... He may not be perfect, and he certainly made some strange choices
29/09/2012 05:37:29 PM
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B-Sand is not a ghost writer
29/09/2012 06:35:16 PM
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Didn't say he should.
29/09/2012 09:07:45 PM
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What is it you want?
29/09/2012 09:39:36 PM
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We want to bitch about an inferior product. Duh.
29/09/2012 10:00:09 PM
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Hmm that's true I guess. Sad though *NM*
29/09/2012 10:07:25 PM
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It is what it is
30/09/2012 12:52:20 AM
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You do know this isn't his series, right?
29/09/2012 04:19:00 PM
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Do you see us going to Mistborn boards to rip his series? Part of the problem is what you say.
29/09/2012 09:57:54 PM
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Apologies for not being clear: I'm only referring to WoT. Haven't read any of his other work...
30/09/2012 06:56:08 PM
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I'd agree that I like his original works more than his WoT books
01/10/2012 06:17:33 PM
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It's fairly simple....
30/09/2012 09:55:52 PM
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Thanks for that insightful response...
30/09/2012 10:37:27 PM
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Try reading something instead of judging. I recommend the Mistborn trilogy *NM*
01/10/2012 01:14:24 AM
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It's more...
01/10/2012 01:05:18 PM
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Re: The burning question to me, after reading all of the comments above, is this...
11/10/2012 08:22:27 PM
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I have an acquaintance who uses "my friend" as punctuation of every sentence.
05/10/2012 02:47:40 PM
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