When I think of "florid description" I actually think of E.R. Eddison's The Worm Ouroboros, one of the first "modern" fantasy novels ever written. If you don't know him (and a lot of people don't), he predates Tolkien's work by a few years. He spent a LOT of time on excessive description.
Nabokov is not florid in his descriptions. He just writes well. The words flow. You could read the book aloud and people would listen just to hear how things were said.
To more broadly address your two-part response, I am not saying that Jordan doesn't tell a good story. For you, it's the way the story develops, for others it may be the content of the story itself.
Being a "good writer", however, usually deals with how a book is written from a compositional standpoint. Does the author repeat phrases? Does he have awkward sentences? Is he directly describing people or taking too much time on stale descriptions? In Jordan's case, he is awful. People read him despite his writing style, not because of it.
His STORYTELLING style, however, has caught people and kept them reading (or rather, as we seem to agree, he did for the first six books). A storytelling style is different from a writing style. I specifically mentioned Dan Brown to make that distinction. Even people who aren't very sophisticated in their approach to books can take the time to gag at Brown's descriptions, the repetitive nature of his prose, the repetitive nature of his prose and the awful adjectives. On the other hand, people tend to ignore that for the stories, which are fast-paced and entertaining. His storytelling style is fantastic, but Brown's writing style is worse than that of many high school students.
I'm not saying that storytelling skill isn't important. I was just answering your question, namely, "Why do people say Jordan wasn't a good writer?" It also explains why some of those same people read him anyway.
PS - For the record, Nabokov wrote Lolita in English, even though he personally translated it into Russian later on.
Nabokov is not florid in his descriptions. He just writes well. The words flow. You could read the book aloud and people would listen just to hear how things were said.
To more broadly address your two-part response, I am not saying that Jordan doesn't tell a good story. For you, it's the way the story develops, for others it may be the content of the story itself.
Being a "good writer", however, usually deals with how a book is written from a compositional standpoint. Does the author repeat phrases? Does he have awkward sentences? Is he directly describing people or taking too much time on stale descriptions? In Jordan's case, he is awful. People read him despite his writing style, not because of it.
His STORYTELLING style, however, has caught people and kept them reading (or rather, as we seem to agree, he did for the first six books). A storytelling style is different from a writing style. I specifically mentioned Dan Brown to make that distinction. Even people who aren't very sophisticated in their approach to books can take the time to gag at Brown's descriptions, the repetitive nature of his prose, the repetitive nature of his prose and the awful adjectives. On the other hand, people tend to ignore that for the stories, which are fast-paced and entertaining. His storytelling style is fantastic, but Brown's writing style is worse than that of many high school students.
I'm not saying that storytelling skill isn't important. I was just answering your question, namely, "Why do people say Jordan wasn't a good writer?" It also explains why some of those same people read him anyway.
PS - For the record, Nabokov wrote Lolita in English, even though he personally translated it into Russian later on.
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Can someone explain to me how Jordan is not a particularly good writer?
21/02/2011 05:41:31 PM
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I personally see it as more of RJ being a fantastic story teller, but not a well structured writer.
21/02/2011 06:44:21 PM
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Re: I personally see it as more of RJ being a fantastic story teller, but not a well structured
22/02/2011 10:59:25 PM
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What do you think about the Southern Gothic authors?
23/02/2011 08:08:26 AM
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Re: What do you think about the Southern Gothic authors?
23/02/2011 10:51:57 AM
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For the same reason that most people think they have above average intelligence.
21/02/2011 11:13:34 PM
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Re: For the same reason that most people think they have above average intelligence. *NM*
22/02/2011 02:39:20 PM
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Re: For the same reason that most people think they have above average intelligence.
22/02/2011 02:41:37 PM
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That's possibly the best explanation of literary criticism I've ever seen.
23/02/2011 02:47:12 AM
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I can take a shot at that, since nobody else seems willing to.
22/02/2011 07:29:20 AM
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Re: I can take a shot at that, since nobody else seems willing to.
22/02/2011 11:23:38 PM
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That has very little to do with anything unless you can provide a real-world analogy to a channeler.
22/02/2011 11:30:52 PM
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Re: That has very little to do with anything unless you can provide a real-world analogy to a
23/02/2011 12:02:24 AM
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As far as I'm concerned, the only way to gauge whether an author is good or not is ...
22/02/2011 03:58:17 PM
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Re: Can someone explain to me how Jordan is not a particularly good writer?
22/02/2011 06:27:11 PM
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I think it has more to do with limitations imposed by how the story was organized and edited.
22/02/2011 07:50:18 PM
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That's interesting, and I have a weird agree/disagree here; also, that Adam Roberts sucks
23/02/2011 02:15:12 AM
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Re: That's interesting, and I have a weird agree/disagree here; also, that Adam Roberts sucks
23/02/2011 11:02:14 AM
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adam roberts reviews
23/02/2011 03:53:49 AM
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And I suspect those who prefer the BS books are those who largely read WoT for the story. *NM*
23/02/2011 08:06:16 AM
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Oh GAWD!... not another pointer to Robert Adam's incoherant muckraking
24/02/2011 07:47:35 PM
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I think DomA answered the question best, but the "do you like it" argument is weak.
22/02/2011 10:32:51 PM
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Re: I think DomA answered the question best, but the "do you like it" argument is weak.
22/02/2011 11:16:24 PM
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The Necronomicon isn't actually a book, you know. *NM*
22/02/2011 11:28:29 PM
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There are nine, actually...
23/02/2011 12:04:55 AM
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Lovecraft's Necronomicon was fictitious. If you want to count fanfiction, fine. *NM*
23/02/2011 12:38:07 AM
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Based on how poorly worded that response was, I'm not sure what to think of it. *NM*
23/02/2011 12:13:00 AM
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I hope I am misunderstanding you.
23/02/2011 10:57:47 PM
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Re: I hope I am misunderstanding you.
24/02/2011 10:41:09 AM
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If the core of the story is all that matters, why read a book
24/02/2011 10:32:01 PM
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Re: If the core of the story is all that matters, why read a book
24/02/2011 11:23:42 PM
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So wait, style is good?
25/02/2011 12:32:07 AM
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That depends...
23/02/2011 03:00:35 AM
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I didn't say aesthetics was the primary criterion. I named three criteria.
23/02/2011 05:39:03 AM
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the "do you like it" is the most important criterion
23/02/2011 10:45:17 PM
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If you don't mind me asking...
24/02/2011 01:05:12 AM
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I don't mind that you ask, but I'm not going to engage in a defense of literature.
24/02/2011 05:35:27 PM
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Re: I don't mind that you ask, but I'm not going to engage in a defense of literature.
24/02/2011 11:26:55 PM
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I'm sure you have a wonderful job awaiting in fast food service.
25/02/2011 01:57:15 AM
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Re: I'm sure you have a wonderful job awaiting in fast food service.
25/02/2011 08:56:06 AM
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...
25/02/2011 01:07:22 AM
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It is not a serious question.
25/02/2011 01:53:59 AM
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Is that so?
25/02/2011 05:58:31 AM
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I'm not fixated with Jordan.
25/02/2011 03:13:56 PM
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Then why do you keep trying to qualify the passage in relation to him?
25/02/2011 06:29:31 PM
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You're conflating two things.
25/02/2011 07:32:59 PM
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All right, now we're getting somewhere.
26/02/2011 12:40:57 AM
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Okay, here you go. I am giving you the benefit of the doubt as to your sincerity.
26/02/2011 03:20:44 PM
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Thank you, and I agree with all your explanations. *NM*
26/02/2011 07:28:09 PM
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No, it is a serious question, just one that can never be seriously answered.
25/02/2011 03:28:48 PM
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Your opinion isn't as valid as anyone else's if that's your opinion.
25/02/2011 04:44:57 PM
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Re: Your opinion isn't as valid as anyone else's if that's your opinion.
25/02/2011 06:05:18 PM
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I'm not wasting my time proving something to an internet moron and troll like you.
25/02/2011 07:36:19 PM
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Ah yes, the wonderful "dissmiss the person who disagrees with me by insulting him tactic"
28/02/2011 02:30:35 PM
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Re: Your opinion isn't as valid as anyone else's if that's your opinion.
26/02/2011 11:06:26 AM
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And part 2, on the analysis of writing.
24/02/2011 01:16:20 AM
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Florid desciption is usually not a good thing.
24/02/2011 05:30:30 PM
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Re: I find this whole thing elitist and more than a bit silly
23/02/2011 06:45:05 AM
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Why do you think mind-expanding literature is restricted to the classics?
23/02/2011 08:03:59 AM
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Re: Why do you think mind-expanding literature is restricted to the classics?
23/02/2011 09:25:10 AM
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Of course people read for pleasure.
23/02/2011 09:04:24 PM
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Ok...
24/02/2011 08:59:27 AM
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"Yeah well, that's, like, just your opinion, man." Good argument.
24/02/2011 03:43:24 PM
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I'm curious to hear who Tom and DomA consider a "very good writer"?
24/02/2011 05:49:13 PM
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Among living writers?
24/02/2011 08:16:08 PM
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My list would be similar...
26/02/2011 07:24:11 AM
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That was a very good list.
26/02/2011 03:07:31 PM
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Re: That was a very good list.
27/02/2011 04:51:43 AM
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Oh, and another question
27/02/2011 05:28:47 PM
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Re: Oh, and another question
01/03/2011 03:42:02 AM
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I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great'
27/02/2011 11:14:30 AM
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Re: I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great'
28/02/2011 11:51:49 PM
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Re: I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great'
03/03/2011 12:01:30 AM
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Re: I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great'
03/03/2011 02:17:06 PM
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He's a great storyteller, but his prose is somewhat uninspiring. *NM*
27/02/2011 07:28:00 PM
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