But really, I'm astounded by how bald his writing is. One thing I get annoyed by is when people use "like" instead of "is." "It's like I've been betrayed" is a dumb thing to say if your spouse cheats on you. You've been betrayed. There's no "like" there.
Sanderson, my first real taste of his writing, comes off as someone who drops comparisons every single time, even when a simile or metaphor might actually be the way to go. We don't understand that someone feels like an insect that's just broken through its shell to discover that it and its place in the world is new. Sanderson just writes "He looked around him and he discovered that he was different and his place in the world also was."
Sanderson, my first real taste of his writing, comes off as someone who drops comparisons every single time, even when a simile or metaphor might actually be the way to go. We don't understand that someone feels like an insect that's just broken through its shell to discover that it and its place in the world is new. Sanderson just writes "He looked around him and he discovered that he was different and his place in the world also was."
Wow, way to argue that a writer uses too much simile and should be more direct, and then in the very next paragraph berate him for being direct.
Just read ToM: Sanderson doesn't know High Chant, only common
23/01/2011 08:03:17 PM
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As someone who's broadly anti-Sanderson
23/01/2011 08:53:52 PM
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LoL - that discredits greatly the main post *NM*
24/01/2011 04:27:45 PM
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No, it doesn't. It "discredits greatly" one of his points, not the main argument. *NM* *NM*
24/01/2011 06:57:38 PM
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Disagree...
25/01/2011 12:36:25 AM
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Or it could be that I read every book 5 times, but like 10 years ago
26/01/2011 05:35:46 AM
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Huh?
23/01/2011 11:51:02 PM
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No, the "misused simile" thing is just a pet peeve
24/01/2011 12:47:04 AM
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Sweated is a word. *NM*
24/01/2011 02:45:57 AM
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Is it? Would you ever write "I had sweated" or "having sweated for an hour?" *NM*
24/01/2011 11:17:04 PM
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Re: Just read ToM: Sanderson doesn't know High Chant, only common
25/01/2011 11:06:24 PM
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I really don't want to come off as a jerk, but really? WoT has never had good writing.
26/01/2011 07:18:03 AM
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If you hate his writing so much then don't read the final book. *NM*
07/02/2011 03:39:43 AM
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