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Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon Send a noteboard - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM
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Very nice! I totally enjoyed that, and hope the next book is as good. There several places that could use fleshing out even more, such as the escape at the end, but on the whole I felt it was extremely well written.
You're writing skills are just too good for working on someone else's world. May I suggest you write your own story? I will be one of the first to buy the book! (color me a new dedicated Deadsy fan!)

There are several places, typos mostly, that I felt needed fixing. I copied the text to a MS Word docx file and made several changes, all marked in blue. Send me (PM) an e-mail address if you want it for reference.
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I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:00 AM 3390 Views
oops *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:29 AM 556 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM 1096 Views
done. Thanks a lot *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 04:58:25 AM 500 Views
Isn't it nice when main characters actually talk to each other? *NM* beetnemesis - 10/01/2011 07:39:30 AM 574 Views
Yes, that was one of things I liked about ToM *NM* DrJacJacMcScrumptious - 10/01/2011 01:35:22 PM 508 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Sidious - 10/01/2011 11:01:21 AM 1103 Views
Agreed, reads much more like RJs style than BS's attempt *NM* Iceman - 10/01/2011 02:24:47 PM 452 Views
Quick, someone tell BJ about it, so he can do a better job on the next book .... Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 03:29:22 PM 1061 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM TyrReborn - 10/01/2011 03:23:29 PM 1128 Views
I like fanfiction, and I liked your overall approach to the scene RugbyPlayingAshaman - 10/01/2011 04:31:00 PM 1112 Views
So YOU are the one at ff.net... Voscaia Sedai - 11/01/2011 09:24:15 AM 1095 Views
Wow, I've never read good fan fiction before, but that was GREAT! The Count - 10/01/2011 05:12:32 PM 892 Views
Will you write part 2? *drools* *NM* Lohikaarme - 10/01/2011 07:18:02 PM 504 Views
Outstanding, you really must grace us with creations wholly yours. Joel - 11/01/2011 02:03:38 AM 1025 Views
You want MORE people bugging you to continue writing?? shaiel - 11/01/2011 03:01:08 AM 997 Views
very nicely done! The Lelaine bit was an especially nice touch darius_sedai - 11/01/2011 09:37:29 PM 1035 Views
This is very good! A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:00:14 AM 981 Views
He didn't go to her to deal with Caemlyn Deadsy - 12/01/2011 03:09:16 PM 1028 Views
Ah, okay A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:47:59 PM 814 Views
I'm looking at it again Deadsy - 13/01/2011 05:33:38 AM 903 Views
You mean Gaidal Cain come out of his larval form? A Deathwatch Guard - 13/01/2011 07:02:50 AM 849 Views
Very Nice! Let's hear some more... malekithe - 12/01/2011 07:07:16 AM 856 Views
Wow. I nearly forgot I was reading Fan Fiction! There is one thing, whitestar101 - 12/01/2011 07:56:15 PM 988 Views
Or perhaps he slept with clothes? Lohikaarme - 17/01/2011 01:45:35 PM 896 Views
Oh wow! helly - 13/01/2011 05:23:53 AM 855 Views
*NM* Darth_Katie - 23/01/2011 06:28:42 AM 480 Views
imho, I wish they'd chosen *you* to take over instead of BSand. It's not like he sucks, but I enjoy newyorkersedai - 02/02/2011 01:42:53 AM 818 Views
Bumping one last time. *NM* Deadsy - 17/01/2013 05:17:28 AM 392 Views
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