I did Ctrl + F on Meidani and nothing.





ok, i'll read it like a normal person now.


I think I'll just edit as I go. I've always been bad at reviews.


Edit 2: Renald is my co-worker's husband's name

Edit 3: I realize that we all knew this was RJ, but the moment I thought "yes, definitely RJ" was when Renald thought "He was on edge because of the crops." I always loved when RJ made his characters trying to convince themselves of things like that

Edit 4: I keep worrying it's almost over. So I looked at the page count and I'm only on page 10 of 72. yay

Edit 5: Damn it! I looked at the forum in between, and Dominic or someone said that the Prologue was 40 pages. So I assumed it meant that I was just looking at bigger font, but I wanted to make sure. So I put in "Go to page 72" and um... Masema's dead and Faile was involved. Spoilers suck! Now I'm super excited though, heh.