My review so far - Edit 4
Before modification by Deadsy at 17/09/2009 05:59:35 AM
I did Ctrl + F on Meidani and nothing.
ok, i'll read it like a normal person now.
I think I'll just edit as I go. I've always been bad at reviews.
Edit 2: Renald is my co-worker's husband's name.
Edit 3: I realize that we all knew this was RJ, but the moment I thought "yes, definitely RJ" was when Renald thought "He was on edge because of the crops." I always loved when RJ made his characters trying to convince themselves of things like that.
Edit 4: I keep worrying it's almost over. So I looked at the page count and I'm only on page 10 of 72. yay
ok, i'll read it like a normal person now.
I think I'll just edit as I go. I've always been bad at reviews.
Edit 2: Renald is my co-worker's husband's name.
Edit 3: I realize that we all knew this was RJ, but the moment I thought "yes, definitely RJ" was when Renald thought "He was on edge because of the crops." I always loved when RJ made his characters trying to convince themselves of things like that.
Edit 4: I keep worrying it's almost over. So I looked at the page count and I'm only on page 10 of 72. yay