Excellent analysis! When re-reading, I will follow your outline and try to imagine the screw-ups - Edit 1
Before modification by Cynewulf at 20/12/2010 04:18:04 PM
aren't there.
Reading this really makes me quite disappointed with Sanderson and Harriet. Perhaps particularly with Harriet. I can't help but feeling that the ending has been more or less ruined. They certainly did not have the best interests of this story in mind when they made the decision to do the split before the whole story had been written.
Reading this really makes me quite disappointed with Sanderson and Harriet. Perhaps particularly with Harriet. I can't help but feeling that the ending has been more or less ruined. They certainly did not have the best interests of this story in mind when they made the decision to do the split before the whole story had been written.