Re: It didn't need to be so out - a few chapters shifted would have helped a lot
DottieGirl Send a noteboard - 06/11/2010 05:30:58 PM
I think the biggest disjointed bit was Tam being in two spots and times at once.
Ooh, ooh, I feel a new Demandred theory forming here...
Seriously, yes, I agree the chronology was off and disturbing. Perhaps it doesn't matter per se now that everyone is gathered together (except Mat, Thom, Moiraine, and Tuon/Seanchan forces), but it was systematically problematic. Hopefully they can tighten things up for the last book.
Ooh, ooh, I feel a new Demandred theory forming here...
Seriously, yes, I agree the chronology was off and disturbing. Perhaps it doesn't matter per se now that everyone is gathered together (except Mat, Thom, Moiraine, and Tuon/Seanchan forces), but it was systematically problematic. Hopefully they can tighten things up for the last book.
Pacing was really off. *spoilers*
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