This is a minor irritant, not a mistake - Edit 1
Before modification by Deadsy at 25/09/2010 09:46:20 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it 
He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."
"She froze." "He froze."

He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."
"She froze." "He froze."