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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy Send a noteboard - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it :)


He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."


"She froze." "He froze."

Egwene froze about 20 times in TGS
This message last edited by Deadsy on 25/09/2010 at 09:46:37 PM
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mistakes sanderson makes that bug you Oberonus - 23/09/2010 05:38:52 PM 1809 Views
Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* Sidious - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3784 Views
Bael mentioning the Aiel Waste; characters using words that are too sophisticated or techical Cannoli - 23/09/2010 06:11:34 PM 1038 Views
I completely agree... DomA - 23/09/2010 08:54:17 PM 892 Views
Re: I completely agree... Cannoli - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 815 Views
Re: I completely agree... DomA - 24/09/2010 06:39:17 PM 776 Views
Oh, sh**, Moiraine! I never thought about that! The comments about her in tGS suggest you're right Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:23:56 AM 838 Views
The entire Graendal scene Marshall - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 932 Views
I think this is the type of info that RJ never got around to revealing. RugbyPlayingAshaman - 23/09/2010 08:46:51 PM 787 Views
Pretty much... DomA - 23/09/2010 09:16:26 PM 893 Views
The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me Narg - 24/09/2010 12:20:50 AM 800 Views
Re: The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me DomA - 24/09/2010 06:03:17 PM 800 Views
Particularly the way he described sex. It reeked of Mormon discomfort with the topic. Cannoli - 24/09/2010 02:04:08 AM 817 Views
Reeked? Great word. It seemed quite in line with RJ's own dealings with the topic. *NM* Narg - 24/09/2010 03:42:28 AM 353 Views
RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO Marshall - 24/09/2010 11:28:25 PM 678 Views
Re: RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO DomA - 25/09/2010 08:56:47 PM 714 Views
RJ said breasts all the time, but in a more clinical manner - folding arms under breasts, etc Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:33:09 AM 847 Views
This stuff is cracking me up. Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:48:56 AM 712 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Cannoli - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 790 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 24/09/2010 05:36:23 PM 877 Views
A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. fionwe1987 - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 899 Views
Re: A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. DomA - 24/09/2010 07:54:54 PM 759 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Sidious - 25/09/2010 10:02:02 AM 684 Views
hmm Marshall - 25/09/2010 02:43:09 PM 689 Views
How she knows its Balefire.. fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 02:54:58 PM 666 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 747 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:48:05 PM 766 Views
Some things... fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 669 Views
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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 696 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 792 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Deadsy - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 683 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 675 Views
You're welcome *NM* Deadsy - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 313 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 761 Views
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