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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy Send a noteboard - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it :)


He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."


"She froze." "He froze."

Egwene froze about 20 times in TGS
This message last edited by Deadsy on 25/09/2010 at 09:46:37 PM
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mistakes sanderson makes that bug you Oberonus - 23/09/2010 05:38:52 PM 1827 Views
Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* Sidious - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3790 Views
Bael mentioning the Aiel Waste; characters using words that are too sophisticated or techical Cannoli - 23/09/2010 06:11:34 PM 1054 Views
I completely agree... DomA - 23/09/2010 08:54:17 PM 912 Views
Re: I completely agree... Cannoli - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 834 Views
Re: I completely agree... DomA - 24/09/2010 06:39:17 PM 788 Views
Oh, sh**, Moiraine! I never thought about that! The comments about her in tGS suggest you're right Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:23:56 AM 854 Views
The entire Graendal scene Marshall - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 955 Views
I think this is the type of info that RJ never got around to revealing. RugbyPlayingAshaman - 23/09/2010 08:46:51 PM 805 Views
Pretty much... DomA - 23/09/2010 09:16:26 PM 907 Views
The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me Narg - 24/09/2010 12:20:50 AM 814 Views
Re: The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me DomA - 24/09/2010 06:03:17 PM 815 Views
Particularly the way he described sex. It reeked of Mormon discomfort with the topic. Cannoli - 24/09/2010 02:04:08 AM 831 Views
Reeked? Great word. It seemed quite in line with RJ's own dealings with the topic. *NM* Narg - 24/09/2010 03:42:28 AM 361 Views
RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO Marshall - 24/09/2010 11:28:25 PM 695 Views
Re: RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO DomA - 25/09/2010 08:56:47 PM 731 Views
RJ said breasts all the time, but in a more clinical manner - folding arms under breasts, etc Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:33:09 AM 865 Views
This stuff is cracking me up. Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:48:56 AM 729 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Cannoli - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 806 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 24/09/2010 05:36:23 PM 894 Views
A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. fionwe1987 - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 917 Views
Re: A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. DomA - 24/09/2010 07:54:54 PM 772 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Sidious - 25/09/2010 10:02:02 AM 698 Views
hmm Marshall - 25/09/2010 02:43:09 PM 704 Views
How she knows its Balefire.. fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 02:54:58 PM 681 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 762 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:48:05 PM 781 Views
Some things... fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 683 Views
Speaking of Kerb BlackAdder - 25/09/2010 09:39:46 PM 677 Views
Mat Knightscape - 24/09/2010 04:44:34 AM 725 Views
Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 712 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 807 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Deadsy - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 695 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 693 Views
You're welcome *NM* Deadsy - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 320 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 788 Views
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