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Did anyone else feel that the Graendal scene was one big infodump? Marshall Send a noteboard - 22/09/2010 03:32:44 AM
The more I read Sanderson, the more I miss RJ's subtlety that Sanderson just utterly, completely lacks. He's a fine writer; he's doing a great job keeping up with characters, interweaving plotlines, and keeping the story moving forward. But what he is not fine at is giving us information: RJ was a master of telling us what was REALLY going on without actually saying it. He wrote for the intelligent reader, and left it to us to piece together the motives and actions of the players. We had to play the Game of Houses, and it adds fun, appeal, and depth to the story.

After reading Graendal's POV, I felt like I was reading a Dan Brown novel. Every last detail about the scene that anyone had questioned was directly addressed. Graendal had thoughts that were not realistic--they only existed to provide us with direct information (i.e. the rats and ravens have to report to the DO; that the TP acts differently, etc.).

I've noticed this throughout TGS, and it's an issue that has been steadily building. I can't really blame BS too much, but I wish he would spend a bit more effort not treating us like high-school readers. I'm really not looking forward to the scene where Graendal is doing dishes and thinks, "The rag she used to wipe the silver goblet reminded her of the cloth Asmodean wore around his neck when she killed him, after having waited for fifteen minutes in the storage room and using a tweeter to track his position."
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They gasped before Graendal wove Air... - 21/09/2010 11:13:48 PM 1431 Views
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Nice catches! - 22/09/2010 04:06:52 PM 1488 Views
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Re: take a pill Fionwe ... no need to go batshit on me for having an opinion. - 22/09/2010 05:45:05 PM 1531 Views
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She says... - 22/09/2010 07:04:32 PM 1465 Views
no one is arguing that - 22/09/2010 07:09:17 PM 1410 Views
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she never shielded them - 22/09/2010 07:22:29 PM 1371 Views
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*NM* - 28/09/2010 11:54:54 PM 922 Views
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For the record - 21/09/2010 10:53:16 PM 1567 Views
She opened two Gateways, IIRC - 21/09/2010 11:58:29 PM 1454 Views
Re: She opened two Gateways, IIRC - 22/09/2010 02:21:47 AM 1485 Views
Did anyone else feel that the Graendal scene was one big infodump? - 22/09/2010 03:32:44 AM 1597 Views
Wait...so NO ONE has wanted to discuss the Sapphic scene at Graendal's place? - 22/09/2010 03:48:36 AM 1621 Views
yes, totally Lesbian. *NM* - 22/09/2010 03:04:16 PM 967 Views
No, the other L word. "LesbiAHNS?" *NM* - 22/09/2010 04:18:55 PM 1022 Views
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Quite a bit... - 22/09/2010 02:31:14 PM 1601 Views
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Thanks for the answers *NM* - 22/09/2010 05:46:05 PM 928 Views
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Shadow invading Kandor and Lan riding trough it. CONNECTION? - 22/09/2010 08:36:05 PM 1630 Views
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I had a similar thought, but... - 23/09/2010 10:40:58 PM 1482 Views
Probably not Sanderson - 23/09/2010 11:11:54 PM 1514 Views
No way - 24/09/2010 07:14:35 AM 1444 Views
I agree. *NM* - 25/09/2010 09:42:46 AM 973 Views
A few nits - 12/10/2010 10:21:27 AM 1439 Views
Canadian Download site - 29/09/2010 12:05:12 AM 1940 Views

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