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Did anyone else feel that the Graendal scene was one big infodump? Marshall Send a noteboard - 22/09/2010 03:32:44 AM
The more I read Sanderson, the more I miss RJ's subtlety that Sanderson just utterly, completely lacks. He's a fine writer; he's doing a great job keeping up with characters, interweaving plotlines, and keeping the story moving forward. But what he is not fine at is giving us information: RJ was a master of telling us what was REALLY going on without actually saying it. He wrote for the intelligent reader, and left it to us to piece together the motives and actions of the players. We had to play the Game of Houses, and it adds fun, appeal, and depth to the story.

After reading Graendal's POV, I felt like I was reading a Dan Brown novel. Every last detail about the scene that anyone had questioned was directly addressed. Graendal had thoughts that were not realistic--they only existed to provide us with direct information (i.e. the rats and ravens have to report to the DO; that the TP acts differently, etc.).

I've noticed this throughout TGS, and it's an issue that has been steadily building. I can't really blame BS too much, but I wish he would spend a bit more effort not treating us like high-school readers. I'm really not looking forward to the scene where Graendal is doing dishes and thinks, "The rag she used to wipe the silver goblet reminded her of the cloth Asmodean wore around his neck when she killed him, after having waited for fifteen minutes in the storage room and using a tweeter to track his position."
This message last edited by Marshall on 22/09/2010 at 03:35:00 AM
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Elayne also called the x2 turtle angreal "weak"... - 21/09/2010 08:00:01 PM 1523 Views
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Who said "they"? - 21/09/2010 09:55:28 PM 1441 Views
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Provide evidence? - 21/09/2010 10:36:36 PM 1467 Views
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They gasped before Graendal wove Air... - 21/09/2010 11:13:48 PM 1445 Views
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So? - 22/09/2010 03:48:11 PM 1303 Views
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Nice catches! - 22/09/2010 04:06:52 PM 1506 Views
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Re: take a pill Fionwe ... no need to go batshit on me for having an opinion. - 22/09/2010 05:45:05 PM 1549 Views
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Well... - 22/09/2010 07:00:26 PM 1482 Views
She says... - 22/09/2010 07:04:32 PM 1483 Views
no one is arguing that - 22/09/2010 07:09:17 PM 1422 Views
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What I think happened - 22/09/2010 09:19:57 AM 1438 Views
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she never shielded them - 22/09/2010 07:22:29 PM 1389 Views
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Re: A lot of unsubstantiated assumptions there... - 23/09/2010 03:03:26 AM 1401 Views
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Re: Mostly agree - 22/09/2010 07:28:42 PM 1348 Views
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I've been on this side for a good long while - 22/09/2010 09:40:43 PM 1534 Views
*NM* - 28/09/2010 11:54:54 PM 928 Views
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So there are 6 Forsaken left. - 21/09/2010 10:23:22 PM 1691 Views
For the record - 21/09/2010 10:53:16 PM 1585 Views
She opened two Gateways, IIRC - 21/09/2010 11:58:29 PM 1466 Views
Re: She opened two Gateways, IIRC - 22/09/2010 02:21:47 AM 1498 Views
Did anyone else feel that the Graendal scene was one big infodump? - 22/09/2010 03:32:44 AM 1610 Views
Wait...so NO ONE has wanted to discuss the Sapphic scene at Graendal's place? - 22/09/2010 03:48:36 AM 1635 Views
yes, totally Lesbian. *NM* - 22/09/2010 03:04:16 PM 975 Views
No, the other L word. "LesbiAHNS?" *NM* - 22/09/2010 04:18:55 PM 1028 Views
Yes, it was totally lesbian. - 22/09/2010 07:09:19 PM 1432 Views
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What does Graendal think of Rand? - 22/09/2010 02:00:28 PM 1614 Views
She was really surprised and scared. - 22/09/2010 02:11:28 PM 1577 Views
I take it you haven't read the Prologue. - 22/09/2010 02:16:49 PM 1454 Views
Quite a bit... - 22/09/2010 02:31:14 PM 1614 Views
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Thanks for the answers *NM* - 22/09/2010 05:46:05 PM 935 Views
Second best prologue ever... - 22/09/2010 06:24:44 PM 1839 Views
It's my favorite ever. Only one dark spot tarnished it. - 22/09/2010 07:18:12 PM 1483 Views
Yeah, tEotW is the best... - 22/09/2010 08:22:12 PM 1510 Views
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Yes. s/He was. - 22/09/2010 08:59:16 PM 1483 Views
Shadow invading Kandor and Lan riding trough it. CONNECTION? - 22/09/2010 08:36:05 PM 1648 Views
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Re: Nice prologue, but not superb, IMO - 23/09/2010 09:54:33 PM 1543 Views
I believe that Sanderson concocted the entire Graendal/Rand/Balefire part - 23/09/2010 10:24:46 PM 2192 Views
I had a similar thought, but... - 23/09/2010 10:40:58 PM 1498 Views
Probably not Sanderson - 23/09/2010 11:11:54 PM 1531 Views
No way - 24/09/2010 07:14:35 AM 1457 Views
I agree. *NM* - 25/09/2010 09:42:46 AM 994 Views
A few nits - 12/10/2010 10:21:27 AM 1464 Views
Canadian Download site - 29/09/2010 12:05:12 AM 1954 Views

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