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Ouch.... DomA Send a noteboard - 27/07/2010 05:48:13 AM
There is also this tweet from BS which I missed until I saw it posted on dragonmount:

"8% cut from Chapter 80. In other news, the chapters have numbers now. 94 chapters in the book plus a multi-scene epilogue."

Fun, Fun.



I didn't really calculate with expected word counts, but just like that it sounds like way too many chapters for a WOT book of the planned length (eg: 55 only for LOC, 58 for TSR, 50 for TGS). Shortening the chapters too much would definitely change the style of WOT.

It sounds like the trend already a bit present in TGS of writing too short scenes for a WOT book (Brandon had a hard time achieving as much in a single long scene/POV as RJ used to, and chopped things in multiple short scenes scattered in different chapters, occasionally with some redundant elements in them - Aviendha's chapters felt like that in TGS. RJ would have made that two longer POVs with her, no more) and switching POV too often is gonna get a bit worse in TOM.

It's not really a good news, I think (hard to tell before reading the thing, though). It's the one aspects of TGS I was the most critical of (one of the very few aspects that actually was detrimental for real to my enjoyement and that didn't feel WOT enough to my taste, the other was the poor care taken to situate us clearly on the timeline along the book, the way Jordan did).

Oh well... hopefully Brandon has not KevinAndersonized the book too much (too short chapters, too short scenes that feel like you're reading a screenplay more than a book... Brandon's (avowed)problem with including the side characters was in part due to that.. he focussed the scenes so much, the scenes which RJ would have made longer with side stuff, taking the opportunity to make the side characters appear briefly in them and their storylines progress by short bit and pieces). He tends to have that flaw a bit in his own books, the earlier ones anyway (those almost dialogue only scenes and single purpose scenes...). There's not something inherently wrong with that, but it's never been the style of WOT.
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tGS: Chapter 81 comment from BS (*spoilers*?) - 27/07/2010 03:57:34 AM 2034 Views
Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 04:03:34 AM 1150 Views
Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 04:11:01 AM 999 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 05:17:22 AM 973 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 09:18:54 AM 860 Views
Yeah, BS said on Twitter... - 27/07/2010 09:47:41 AM 1009 Views
Again! - 27/07/2010 11:41:33 PM 984 Views
Re: Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 05:28:53 AM 960 Views
Yeah, I wondered about that... - 27/07/2010 05:02:27 PM 832 Views
Re: Yeah, I wondered about that... - 28/07/2010 04:04:06 AM 771 Views
... and 94 chapters - 27/07/2010 04:04:51 AM 985 Views
Thats a lot of chapters *NM* - 27/07/2010 05:16:35 AM 393 Views
Ouch.... - 27/07/2010 05:48:13 AM 993 Views
BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 08:15:06 AM 911 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 05:20:56 PM 819 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 28/07/2010 12:01:26 AM 901 Views
Don't you mean aMoL: Ch 81? - 27/07/2010 08:38:30 PM 861 Views
The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:24:43 PM 396 Views
Re: The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. - 27/07/2010 11:28:51 PM 813 Views
Now he said... - 28/07/2010 08:32:17 AM 931 Views
rock on *NM* - 27/07/2010 04:05:48 AM 369 Views
Hmm, Lan's death? - 27/07/2010 08:09:25 AM 889 Views
sure, why not. my only problem is... - 27/07/2010 08:58:06 AM 868 Views
I hope you are right. - 27/07/2010 09:19:44 AM 890 Views
I don't think he will die - 27/07/2010 11:07:27 AM 905 Views
I think if Lan dies... - 27/07/2010 09:45:05 AM 885 Views
I was thinking Cadsuane *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:46:26 AM 395 Views
Also possible, of course - 27/07/2010 10:58:34 AM 854 Views
I don't consider it foreshadowing - 27/07/2010 11:15:37 AM 778 Views
Hmm, I doubt it... - 27/07/2010 11:25:57 AM 796 Views
Re: Hmm, I doubt it... - 28/07/2010 12:47:33 AM 803 Views
Either Lan or Rand, I guess. *NM* - 28/07/2010 08:02:37 AM 376 Views
Or... - 31/07/2010 02:59:22 AM 763 Views
It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 12:25:47 AM 978 Views
Oh, I like this. - 28/07/2010 01:35:48 AM 831 Views
I do too. - 28/07/2010 01:43:12 PM 758 Views
Perhaps, too early, yes... - 28/07/2010 07:57:34 AM 778 Views
Re: It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 08:43:31 AM 783 Views
RJ/ Harriet should have picked you, Dom... - 28/07/2010 08:47:34 AM 800 Views
The death of Elayne? Or Min? - 27/07/2010 02:47:11 PM 884 Views
The problem with this idea is... - 27/07/2010 04:26:33 PM 827 Views
rand's fake death. from a POV that thinks he died for real *NM* - 27/07/2010 07:07:00 PM 404 Views
this is what i was just thinking *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:27:12 PM 360 Views
My bets are on Rand's actual death - 30/07/2010 07:40:06 AM 826 Views
Lan's death and Nynaeve's reaction would fit "heart-wrenching", Cadsuane's not so much for most *NM* - 29/07/2010 03:50:34 PM 353 Views
Certainly - 29/07/2010 05:34:11 PM 781 Views

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