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Because "no man" fits the dramatic tone of the prior clauses, and "no one" does not Cannoli Send a noteboard - 12/10/2017 11:22:40 PM

"No one" is conversational speech. How much of the rest of the spiel sounds like something you'd hear in a conversation?
"Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five year mission, to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations. To boldly go where..."

If you want to use "no one", it should be consistent with the rest.

"Space is the last place to explore. The starship called the Enterprise is making these voyages. Over five years, it's supposed to explore strange new planets, and look for new kinds of life or civilizations we haven't heard of, and look for them where no one else has gone yet."

Cannoli
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I just figured out how to fix Star Trek: The Next Generation (albeit about 30 years too late) - 12/10/2017 03:23:44 AM 656 Views
...why is this preferable to "where no one has gone before?" *NM* - 12/10/2017 07:17:37 AM 240 Views
I was wondering that myself..... *NM* - 12/10/2017 05:13:26 PM 210 Views
Because "no man" fits the dramatic tone of the prior clauses, and "no one" does not - 12/10/2017 11:22:40 PM 450 Views
Both your fix and their edit are not good. - 12/10/2017 01:22:20 PM 523 Views
I prefer "to boldly go where no man has gone before" - 12/10/2017 04:33:51 PM 493 Views
The original language was clearly superior. *NM* - 12/10/2017 04:52:48 PM 214 Views
As was the acting - 12/10/2017 07:09:58 PM 495 Views
Uhh... If the 'Kirk vs Picard' fight happens under that criteria - 12/10/2017 07:12:52 PM 459 Views
I thought you were being silly, so I played along - 12/10/2017 07:23:17 PM 517 Views
tut-tut - 13/10/2017 02:32:54 PM 439 Views
he was more fun to watch and was more likeable - 13/10/2017 02:07:51 PM 444 Views

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