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I want to stick a wikipedia-style "who?" in there. Tim Send a noteboard - 14/12/2009 10:53:02 AM
When conservative commentators say the “Golden Age” of marriage they are usually referring to the 1950s model.


You need to back that up with references. Otherwise you can easily create any kind of straw man you want, and nobody will be able to contradict you.
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What do you think of this intro? Blaine - 14/12/2009 06:14:51 AM 642 Views
I'm not a fan of the first two sentences. Brian - 14/12/2009 06:42:10 AM 417 Views
Well, i know for a fact that he doesn't opening with questions Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:02:03 AM 526 Views
Ahhh, one of those professors. Brian - 14/12/2009 07:22:46 AM 410 Views
Being sneaky, hmmm. I like this idea. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:59:39 AM 204 Views
Sentence fragments are unacceptable in technical writing. You need to fix that. Ghavrel - 14/12/2009 06:51:05 AM 412 Views
I think i see what you are talking about, thanks. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:05:04 AM 210 Views
It's like a Pleasentville film review. *NM* AgentOrange - 14/12/2009 09:54:14 AM 164 Views
I actually mention it a few times later. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 08:48:11 PM 211 Views
I want to stick a wikipedia-style "who?" in there. Tim - 14/12/2009 10:53:02 AM 403 Views
That's actually how we're taught to write in American high schools... Lupine - 14/12/2009 02:39:56 PM 401 Views
Part of my problem is that he hasn't told me what level this is for. Tim - 14/12/2009 03:04:40 PM 379 Views
Aye, but it's an intro. Rebekah - 15/12/2009 08:07:38 AM 346 Views
References should come at the first mention of whatever it is. *NM* Tim - 15/12/2009 08:42:27 AM 161 Views
You presume correctly Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:19:07 PM 443 Views
It's simply an introduction, my citations and stuff come in a little later. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 08:49:15 PM 208 Views
I smell a strawman... Tashmere - 15/12/2009 02:25:36 AM 411 Views
well it was in response to a prompt which stated people call it the "Golden Age". My hands were tied *NM* Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:20:54 PM 194 Views
Stylistically it needs a lot of work. Tom - 15/12/2009 03:28:24 AM 455 Views
Hell, with a critique like that I may start putting up my introductory paragraphs. *NM* Ghavrel - 15/12/2009 04:37:53 AM 234 Views
Wow, thanks *NM* Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:22:48 PM 220 Views
That was a good critique. *NM* Tashmere - 16/12/2009 01:21:28 AM 159 Views
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