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Trolololol gotta love RAFO *NM* Dan Send a noteboard - 02/12/2012 11:50:12 PM
Don't usually see that one much outside of Deviantart or FF.net :P

If it's impossible for your characters to act out of character, that means they don't HAVE a character. This not only makes it difficult for your readers to care about a bunch of interchangeable nobodies but removes the potential for character development over the course of the story. Your story will end up being purely events-driven, severely limiting your potential for storytelling as well as your readers' emotional investment.

If you really like the idea of your main character being shaken up by this particular case, why not come up with an in-character reason for it? What is it about this case that has him so upset/terrified? Maybe he doesn't even know and has to figure it out over the course of the story...and how to get over it so he can do his job. If you explore explore the why behind his actions, you could have a nice little personal story being told alongside the main events-driven story, or even influencing it. Instead of being someone who just reacts to outside events, your main character now has a stake in them, and we're rooting for him.

Whatever you end up doing, good luck.
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Writing is wierd. - 02/12/2012 06:46:44 AM 538 Views
So go back and re-write - 02/12/2012 09:09:41 AM 448 Views
That's not how I write. - 02/12/2012 02:36:10 PM 428 Views
Ah, the old "it's my style" excuse... - 02/12/2012 07:02:11 PM 429 Views
Trolololol gotta love RAFO *NM* - 02/12/2012 11:50:12 PM 256 Views
It's a valid critique, I'd say. - 03/12/2012 05:39:54 PM 440 Views
Ooh, A Ninja editor. - 03/12/2012 02:35:16 PM 465 Views
I want to read this when it's done. *NM* - 02/12/2012 04:34:28 PM 270 Views
You should know me better than that by now. - 03/12/2012 02:51:16 PM 459 Views
Maybe you should learn to spell "weird" first. - 02/12/2012 08:11:57 PM 399 Views
If you ever do decide to point that out, let me know. - 03/12/2012 02:49:14 PM 428 Views
Don't you just love it when stuff like that happens? - 02/12/2012 08:46:27 PM 456 Views
Re: Don't you just love it when stuff like that happens? - 03/12/2012 02:52:05 PM 439 Views
I wrote about 35,000 words of Lovecraft homage earlier this year. - 03/12/2012 04:55:53 PM 601 Views

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