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Re: I guess we'll have a few disagreements here, Dom DomA Send a noteboard - 18/04/2010 04:38:10 AM
(which I will argue in some aspects is a better-written novel).


Dune Messiah is a very different novel, with a neutral narrator. The rest of the Dune books are written that way. Not the first one. Dune is not really "a series". The books are very disjointed stylistically as well as in the author's intents.

Herbert saw Dune Messiah as a kind of coda to the first book. He had been convinced that Dune was a more powerful book if it stopped when Paul became Emperor, without his downfall.

Readers have been complaining about the different perspectives in DM since publication. Herbert was a bit disappointed that so many readers didn't see through the smokescreen of the myth making ongoing in the first book and saw Paul as a real messianic figure instead of a man-made messiah, that they were angry when the second book showed Paul as a deeply flawed and very human man, not as the almost demi-god/hero Irulan had tried to make him in the first book.

Incidentally, Herbert was rather pissed off when David Lynch (or his producers, I can't recall) chose to end the movie with a real miracle (it rains on Dune when Paul wins). Herbert thought it ruined a very important aspect of his book.

As for the characterizations, I seem to recall more depth to Orestes, Electra, Agamemnon, and Oedipus than I found in this volume.


I wonder how much the millenia of interpretation of those texts is tainting your vision of their depth, though.

If you speed read those tragedies and could make abstraction of everything you might know about them, would you still find their characters so "deep"? Hard to tell, those characters are so deeply ingrained in our culture.

Yes, when talking about perceived intended effects and how some were muted due to these, as you say, calculated effects, yes indeed they were flaws. Not fatal flaws, but flaws that to me seemed to weaken the power of the narrative at inopportune times.


The conceit Herbert used, to tell a story about power, the manipulation of faith, myth making through a text itself manipulated by a character intent of establishing the myth of Paul's rise to power for political reasons didn't work for you. That's fine. You think this weakened the novel. That's fine too. Call the concept flawed then, because the execution itself does fit the intent quite well.

Dune really stands out in the Herbert canon. None of his other books (and I've read all but one or two) is written that style.

I don't know about that. Sounds more like an attempt to justify a story that didn't feel "real" in places where it appeared the author might have intended for there to be some emotional resonance. This "woodenness" isn't as present in Dune Messiah, where another tragedy unfolded. This time, however, that second tragedy felt more "real" and less stilted in its presentation. Of course, I may end up being one of those rare people who'll argue that Dune Messiah contains near the power of the original book...


As I said, Herbert reverted to more traditional storytelling for the other books.

Except I wouldn't have argued that about Wolfe because I could read the game going on.


Whereas in Dune you missed it. It's all right. Most readers fail to take notice of the implications behind the fact Irulan, Paul's propagandist, is the fictitious author of the first Dune book.

It's even sometimes presented as a failure of Herbert not to have made the biased nature of the story presented in Dune more obvious.

a mixed bag that attempts to portray omniscience when limiting such might have produced a conflicted document similar to that which you argue is taking place.


It's not a conflicted document though, it's a biased document.

This is not an "original theory" of mine, let alone an apology of the novel. It's Herbert's own description (taken from a commentary on the poor reception Dune Messiah received among his readers). He was baffled at first that the readers were angry at him for "destroying" Paul. It was clear to him the Paul presented in Dune was not a real man but a politico-religious myth created by Irulan.

It's "sloppy" in part because it doesn't allow for the characters to develop and to be more than just ciphers.


Are they meant to be so much more than ciphers considering the nature of the work, though?

It's only with the second and third books that the iconic figures of book 1 become more than icons. To an extent. I grant you characterization never was Herbert's greatest strength and certainly not a great attraction to his books. His often brilliant ideas, his settings, his complex themes and interactions almost always overshadow his characters., and often the plot (like is the case in Dune, where the Atreides tragedy is fairly secondary to the ideas and concepts) Readers who fell in love with Jessica and co. are often those who react very strongly to archetypal characters.


Dune's characters are more memorable than some in part because they are archetypal - but to me there's really only two fascinating characters in Dune, Leto II - and Odrade. Of many of his other novels I have extremely vivid memories - I could still discuss some of the themes though I've read those books last in the late 80s, but except for Fanny-May in the Whipping Star that is kind of unforgetable (and makes me remember McKie of the BuSab by incidence), I'd struggle to remember any specific character in Herbert's non-Dune works, whereas I'll always remember Ship (the spaceship that decided it is God) or Pandora (it rivals Arrakis as a "character", and it's even harsher).

I also put "ecology" in scare quotes because I wanted to focus on the meaning of the word. It is unfortunate that people tend to overlook the give/take aspects of ecosystems on humans themselves. I saw this book (much less in the second, though) attempt to place human motivations within a complex ecosystem of stimuli/responses.


These are themes Herbert returned to in his series with Bill Ransom that has never been republished in English (though Tor has reprinted a very great deal of the novels, perhaps that series is coming. Another "must" would be the collections of novellas - Herbert has a few quite outstanding ones), and in a fashion he also explored it with the toxic planet Dosadi, where people must live under dome.

Archetypes are fine to an extent, but one may be pardoned if a reader found the archetypes to be too limiting and untrue in parts to the narrative setting.


But then, Dune presents an ultra conservative and even retrograd universe and the book is written as religious propaganda. That Herbert through Irulan turned everyone into archetypal figures isn't very surprising. This gets massively toned down with the latter books.

I was thinking more of the Fremen women than the Bene Gesserit, to be honest.


The comment about nunneries was about Fremen women?

Fremen women are a toned down version of arabic women. The Fremen are a terribly traditional society, with very defined social roles. I don't think Herbert offered this as a role model for women anymore than he was an advocate of an aristocratic society.

I'm just surprised you picked on this. I've discussed Dune with many women over the years, some of them can definitely be called feminists, and none of them ever seemed to have raised an eyebrow over Herbert's female characters.


There's an almost (un)holy trinity in a story: Author-Text-Reader.


Yeah, Eco's Lector in Fabula was part of my college curriculum too.

Conversely, I view the Text as being a very malleable entity and I'm not certain if you don't view it as being a more rigid object.


I'm just quite baffled that in a fairly short review and general review of Dune, the "depiction of homosexuality" is something you thought to stand out enough to be worth so many words.

It feels as if you tried to find signs the book has aged and came up with two fairly minor issues.

From whence do you derive this interpretation? I saw making the Baron a homosexual who prefers pretty young boys (younger than 18) to be the underscoring of just how depraved he was.


I don't know... I don't make this association myself, and the fact the Baron was homosexual (actually, he was rather bisexual, and impotent beside) never stood out to me as a central characteristic of the character. The guy to me is just a serial killer, his gender preferences are irrelevant. To him sex is death. His partners are young and beautiful because himself is fat, old and ugly, and he seeks to destroy what's young and beautiful. He is an Ogre, really.

I never saw him as a general and negative commentary on homosexuality.

Mind you, that's already better than the old accusation that the Baron Vladimir was intended as a very offensive allegory of the USSR.

And describing homosexuality as being symbolic of "the antithesis of the procreative drive"? If I'm not mistaken, that viewpoint today, by some, would be considered to be a sign of homophobia.


It's not homophobic, it's just biology. Gay sex is sex that can't lead to conception and is thus dissociated from reproductive impulses, it's just a simple fact. Here, it is used negatively (House Harkonen is sterile and self-destructive), but it's not always so. Elsewhere (not in Herbert) it's presented as an idealized form of sexuality, totally free of the pressure of the procreative drive, a "purer" form of love.

Perhaps, but it's interesting that you mention this in light of your disagreement about how some "modern readers" might interpret Herbert's purported narrative views on gender and sexuality.


I simply disagree with you that there are issues for "modern readers" in the depiction of women in Dune, and I think you really went out of your way a little to find an issue with the fact the villain is bisexual.

I've read a great deal of critical material about Dune since the 90s, and I must say I've rarely seen the "modern reader" take issues with depictions of women or homosexuality. In the 90s, some people were arguing whether Dune had lost its relevance as spec fic with the end of the cold war and its polarized world with the two sides salivating over control of the middle-east. The gulf war later put an end to that. Since 9/11, virtually all the "issues" I've seen some "modern readers" take with the book concerned the depiction of freedom fighters and terrorism, now that Paul is less readily seen as a kind of adolescent Lawrence of Arabia and far more obviously identifiable with leaders of the Bin Laden type. With the big changes in geopolitics since 1965, has Herbert's depiction of jihadists turned into something subversive?

On the other hand, there are those who argue Dune was above all a lesson about the dangers of oppression and the power of religion that can be manipulated and channelled that resonated in the neo-colonialism and clientelism of the cold war years, and in the post-9/11 world i'ts the consequences and the religious factors (the manipulation of muslim beliefs by the islamists) that have become even more tangible and relevant.


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I was using a fairly precise term when I said "ecological" - 18/04/2010 12:13:14 AM 1094 Views
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Please read linked interview...as I call bullshit. Also, why are your walls white? - 18/04/2010 05:18:07 AM 957 Views
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That was most of my issue. - 21/04/2010 12:12:56 AM 853 Views
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Re: That was most of my issue. - 29/04/2010 11:38:26 PM 810 Views
Just because something plays a dominate role doesn't make it a theme - 21/04/2010 02:09:42 PM 950 Views
A theme is merely a dominant strain in a story; there can be more than one theme present - 21/04/2010 11:21:38 PM 912 Views
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Good points - 22/04/2010 09:19:45 PM 894 Views
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when you call it human ecology I come much closer to agreeing - 22/04/2010 02:16:58 PM 873 Views
Not really sure how Larry's definition is archaic. - 19/04/2010 07:52:27 PM 979 Views
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You're not using "archaic" correctly - 20/04/2010 10:07:31 PM 850 Views
Your patronizing manner aside, that's not "archaic" at all. - 21/04/2010 01:46:50 AM 759 Views
doesn't that regulate the point down to interesting trivia? - 21/04/2010 02:36:38 PM 876 Views
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Funny the things people focus on - 21/04/2010 11:24:59 PM 850 Views
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People who see this as an ecological book are missing the point of the book - 16/04/2010 06:28:40 PM 1336 Views
Books can have more than one theme. Great books almost always do. *NM* - 16/04/2010 07:15:11 PM 432 Views
I agree with that I just never really the ecological theme to Dune - 16/04/2010 10:12:26 PM 1045 Views
Ecology goes more than one way - 17/04/2010 12:12:45 AM 990 Views
There are several points to the book/series - 17/04/2010 12:11:38 AM 1063 Views
Everyone get something different from a book - 19/04/2010 07:01:51 PM 1248 Views
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I guess we'll have a few disagreements here, Dom - 17/04/2010 10:22:27 PM 1234 Views
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I thought all of Dune had begun as a serial in a SF magazine. *NM* - 22/04/2010 01:58:22 PM 371 Views
And Dune Messiah as well was serialized at first, in Galaxy *NM* - 22/04/2010 09:31:54 PM 382 Views
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I didn't see that in Alia - 21/04/2010 11:27:22 PM 770 Views
One of my favorite series! - 21/04/2010 03:30:57 PM 778 Views
I didn't "miss it" as much as I chose to deemphasize it - 21/04/2010 11:29:50 PM 703 Views
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His style doesn't appeal to me as much, unfortunately - 22/04/2010 09:17:21 PM 701 Views
You might want to track down his short stories one day... - 23/04/2010 02:06:09 PM 927 Views
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See...I think I made a mistake in my reading of Dune - 22/04/2010 07:26:28 AM 878 Views
Depends - 22/04/2010 08:01:39 AM 789 Views
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read something else - 23/04/2010 07:49:34 PM 776 Views
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I read the wiki synopses of those two books - 29/04/2010 09:44:07 PM 796 Views
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