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Huh. Lana Del Rey quotes Nabokov... I had not made that connection. Legolas Send a noteboard - 26/05/2014 11:17:47 PM

I did read Lolita once, but didn't remember that that was where her "light of my life, fire of my loins" line comes from.

Anyhow, Lolita's opening paragraph is definitely great, while Sanderson's is not, so much. I'm not sure if comparing these two makes much sense, though - there's plenty of great writers who do use plenty of detail in their description, I dare say, perhaps even in the opening paragraph.

Like, say, this:

"In the town there were two mutes, and they were always together. Early every morning they would come out from the house where they lived and walk arm in arm down the street to work. The two friends were very different. The one who always steered the way was an obese and dreamy Greek. In the summer he would come out wearing a yellow or green polo shirt stuffed sloppily into his trousers in front and hanging loose behind. When it was colder he wore over this a shapeless sweater. His face was round and oily, with half-closed eyelids and lips that curved in a gentle, stupid smile. The other mute was tall. His eyes had a quick, intelligent expression. He was always immaculate and very soberly dressed."

Nothing so spectacular as the Nabokov opening lines, and a few parts that go into quite a lot of detail, but it works all the same, and opens one of the best 20th century American novels (Carson McCullers' "The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter", if you're wondering).

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Friendly challenge to Larry and other literary "snobs" on the board..... - 25/05/2014 06:44:34 PM 1215 Views
As it happens, I wrote an example last year. - 25/05/2014 07:13:41 PM 1196 Views
Nice *NM* - 27/05/2014 02:43:53 AM 519 Views
Fair enough, but do you mind me waiting just a little bit? - 26/05/2014 04:57:18 AM 1191 Views
Re: Fair enough, but do you mind me waiting just a little bit? - 26/05/2014 09:10:31 PM 1129 Views
I really should read Irving, I see - 27/05/2014 06:10:50 AM 1046 Views
Re: I really should read Irving, I see - 28/05/2014 03:01:24 AM 1047 Views
Promising opening paragraph, yes, but... - 26/05/2014 10:55:16 PM 952 Views
I think those shifts are part of the character, not something unintentional - 27/05/2014 06:08:44 AM 964 Views
So bad prose is okay if it is intentional? *NM* - 27/05/2014 03:54:34 PM 469 Views
Okay, I do of course miss the perspective of what comes after. - 27/05/2014 06:29:33 PM 864 Views
I proudly claim the title of literary snob, and will provide you with a quick, unscientific example. - 26/05/2014 08:15:04 PM 1062 Views
LOL! - 26/05/2014 10:03:50 PM 1185 Views
Huh. Lana Del Rey quotes Nabokov... I had not made that connection. - 26/05/2014 11:17:47 PM 1174 Views
That quote from Lolita sounds like it is from a romance novel with Fabio on the cover. - 27/05/2014 03:40:37 AM 972 Views
Bah! - 27/05/2014 07:50:15 PM 1020 Views
Alloy of Law was great *NM* - 28/05/2014 08:16:26 PM 490 Views
Hell Yeah! *NM* - 28/05/2014 08:36:40 PM 470 Views
The audiobook was pretty great, as well. *NM* - 29/05/2014 09:19:07 PM 509 Views

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