Active Users:872 Time:25/11/2024 08:10:56 AM
Lynch can be such a tease. Nate Send a noteboard - 16/07/2013 04:35:51 PM

He gives us that awful cliffhanger ending to the first half of the book, and then he shifts to an entirely different scene and gives us Sofia and Dona Vorchenza (who is of course secretly the Spider) having tea in a tower, while we don't know if Locke is alive or dead (though we have to assume he's alive, since the book is named after him and there are still quite a few pages left).

This is where Locke's cleverness once again starts to come back to bite him. He had no way of knowing that the noble families had some inkling of how they might possibly get information to the Spider. Normally, as he told the Salvaras, he relies on his victims' embarrassment to keep them quiet, but the Salvaras haven't been embarrassed yet. They think that they're in on the game. So if they get into a conversation with someone who might also know something about that game, they have no reason to keep quiet. Add in Sofia's worries that something is off, and the gang is screwed. Well, they're screwed by the Falconer and the Grey King and Barsavi already, but now we know that when they get out of that, they'll be screwed by the Spider as well.

In Chapter 10, if I'm remembering these correctly, Jean and Bug rescue Locke from the cask of horse urine after fighting off large aquatic spiders, sent to kill them by the Falconer. Thankfully the Falconer is lazy. I mean, I assume the in-universe explanation is that he was needed by the Grey King and couldn't be spared to kill Jean and Bug himself, but we've seen his power. He could have gone down there and finished off both of them in about ten seconds flat, and been on his way. Never trust an aquatic spider to do a bondsmage's job, dude.

Also, I'm not sure how long Locke held his breath, but it felt like forever. Guy's got lungs of steel.

But I guess what the Falconer did with his time was to go to the hideout and kill Calo and Galdo, and then steal all their money. That was another shock, the first time. He sets a trap for Jean, just in case he survives the spiders, and leaves one guy to kill Bug. Why he never considered the idea that if Jean survived, Locke might survive too, I'm not certain. I guess he never counted on Locke's lungs of titanium. But leaving only one guy to kill Bug? Way too efficient, Falconer. Leave two, get the job done right.

Despite my jabs, this was a pretty compelling chapter, and by the end the gang has been decimated. I didn't expect this, given that the entire series is named after them. But three of our main characters are dead, and we're left with Locke and Jean. Defeated, broke, half-dead, alone. No resources, no money, and precious few connections. They burn the elderglass cellar behind them.

Shit just got real. From here onward is easily my favourite part of the book.

As an aside, I'm currently reading Red Seas Under Red Skies, the second book in the series. It's been interesting, because on my first readthrough I remember liking Lies more than Seas; but on this re-read, I'm actually finding it the other way around. Seas is holding up better to a re-read. I'm enjoying the prose and the plot more even though I know what's coming, whereas Lies has suffered a bit without the unexpectedness of the plot behind it. It's not what I was expecting from this reread, but it gives me hope for Republic of Thieves. Because while I used to think that Lynch had taken a step backward after the first book, now I'm starting to come around to the idea that he actually improved, even though I couldn't see it on a first read.

Warder to starry_nite

Chapterfish — Nate's Writing Blog
http://chapterfish.wordpress.com
This message last edited by Nate on 16/07/2013 at 10:35:18 PM
Reply to message
Reread: The Lies of Locke Lamora by Scott Lynch - 03/06/2013 10:07:06 AM 1223 Views
The Prologue - 03/06/2013 10:08:39 AM 857 Views
Re: The Prologue - 04/06/2013 09:09:56 PM 918 Views
Re: The Prologue - 10/06/2013 03:34:28 PM 870 Views
I'd forgotten most of this. - 10/06/2013 03:32:26 PM 703 Views
Chapters One and Two. - 10/06/2013 03:36:57 PM 691 Views
I was waiting for someone else to go first. - 13/06/2013 03:39:31 PM 781 Views
What do you mean by "lampshading"? - 18/06/2013 02:52:46 PM 745 Views
I will explain! It requires Chapter Three information. - 18/06/2013 03:55:55 PM 709 Views
Thanks; I'd never seen the term before. *NM* - 25/06/2013 04:57:47 PM 331 Views
Falling somewhat behind, but I'm still participating in this... - 02/07/2013 10:50:27 PM 1224 Views
Not as entranced as I thought I would be. - 18/06/2013 02:47:24 PM 682 Views
Re: Descriptions - 24/06/2013 05:00:34 PM 780 Views
Re: Descriptions - 25/06/2013 04:59:28 PM 720 Views
I'm inclined to agree with that assessment. - 02/07/2013 10:54:32 PM 821 Views
Chapters 3 and 4. - 18/06/2013 02:53:34 PM 701 Views
Initial thought: - 18/06/2013 02:55:52 PM 680 Views
This is another one with messed up timelines. - 24/06/2013 04:47:16 PM 2894 Views
Re: This is another one with messed up timelines. - 25/06/2013 05:01:35 PM 2536 Views
It's funny - your comment above had spoiled me so... - 08/08/2013 05:25:31 PM 803 Views
Re: Sabetha - 08/08/2013 05:42:18 PM 758 Views
The first part of the book is a little slow, I've decided. - 25/06/2013 05:05:45 PM 705 Views
It does really pick up, doesn't it? - 13/08/2013 10:37:26 PM 608 Views
Chapters 5 and 6. *NM* - 25/06/2013 05:06:10 PM 308 Views
Things really pick up now. - 28/06/2013 04:04:27 PM 736 Views
Re: Women (spoilers) - 01/07/2013 04:56:07 PM 723 Views
Re: Things really pick up now. - 13/08/2013 10:56:37 PM 762 Views
Chapters 7 and 8. - 10/07/2013 06:22:02 PM 776 Views
Chapters 9 and 10. *NM* - 10/07/2013 06:22:22 PM 367 Views
Lynch can be such a tease. - 16/07/2013 04:35:51 PM 787 Views
I love Doña Vorchenza - 30/07/2013 02:28:30 PM 818 Views
Chapters 11 and 12. *NM* - 24/07/2013 06:34:25 PM 332 Views
Lynch is ruthless in these chapters. - 30/07/2013 02:40:19 PM 822 Views
Poor everyone. - 02/08/2013 11:04:34 PM 744 Views
Chapters 13 and 14. *NM* - 24/07/2013 06:34:41 PM 345 Views
These are very satisfying chapters, on the whole. - 30/07/2013 03:11:28 PM 760 Views
Chapters 15 and 16 and the epilogue. *NM* - 30/07/2013 02:09:39 PM 326 Views
Disappointing, on the whole, I felt. - 14/08/2013 09:25:31 PM 780 Views
I liked parts of it, but you make good points. - 15/08/2013 05:45:14 PM 872 Views
Yeah, I liked parts too - but still. - 15/08/2013 06:54:19 PM 704 Views
I enjoyed it enough to overlook any deficiencies, apparently. - 21/08/2013 08:09:54 PM 864 Views
Re: Disappointing, on the whole, I felt. - 22/09/2013 11:22:19 PM 808 Views
Oh my. - 23/09/2013 06:00:44 PM 689 Views
Re: Oh my. - 09/10/2013 10:12:55 PM 745 Views

Reply to Message