Yes, and punctuation marks go inside the quodation marks, "like so." - Edit 3
Before modification by Aeryn at 12/04/2011 05:20:05 PM
Run-on sentence after run-on sentence, with awkward words and turns of phrase.
I will probably have to find a good scene from American Psycho.
I will probably have to find a good scene from American Psycho.
The "your" was intentional. I find the rhythm of the sentences hypnotically beautiful. It could be a poem. I read it out loud just now, and I still stand by my opinion. Maybe your objection is to the style of prose.