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*nods* ironclad Send a noteboard - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM
First of all, I found that sex scene absolutely atrocious. It seems to me that Tanith Lee obviously never intended to read that passage aloud because the words just sound all wrong and smashed together in a haphazard way. It doesn't flow, it doesn't drag me along with it the way a good sex scene in a book should.

That's exactly how I felt too. Trying way too hard to sound like good literature, but not sexy at all.
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That is good. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 01:52:31 AM 389 Views
Cersei and random noble chick, last GRRM novel I read. (like 5 years ago) *NM* badassashaman - 11/04/2011 12:04:17 AM 340 Views
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This request is causing me a great deal of distress. Tom - 11/04/2011 04:12:19 PM 1130 Views
*nods* ironclad - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM 1009 Views
You have to type up some samples for me, b/c so far I think your crazy. I love that paragraph. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 11:42:26 PM 316 Views
"you're", not "your". And the paragraph was awful. Tom - 12/04/2011 12:28:02 AM 817 Views
Yes, and punctuation marks go inside the quodation marks, "like so." Aeryn - 12/04/2011 05:16:55 PM 972 Views
Wait... they do? rebelaessedai - 14/04/2011 03:26:10 AM 789 Views
No they don't, at least not in my reply. Tom - 14/04/2011 05:44:50 AM 838 Views
Re: No they don't, at least not in my reply. Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:38:37 PM 774 Views
That would be wrong and ugly. Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:51:05 PM 785 Views
... *NM* Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:52:20 PM 343 Views
Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Tom - 14/04/2011 06:00:16 AM 839 Views
Re: Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:30:58 PM 853 Views
Once more into the breach Tom - 14/04/2011 05:27:37 PM 974 Views
I agree with you on some points, disagree on others. Legolas - 14/04/2011 06:57:07 PM 1036 Views
Only in America Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:36:38 PM 950 Views
The ones in Illuminatus were sometimes hot, and usually pretty funny. *NM* Panorphaeon - 11/04/2011 07:34:49 PM 332 Views
I understand why you like this. rebelaessedai - 12/04/2011 02:35:37 AM 823 Views
Would one I wrote myself count? imlad - 14/04/2011 12:23:43 PM 816 Views
No. *NM* Vivien - 21/04/2011 04:35:47 AM 341 Views
I read a good one last night... by Tanith Lee! rebelaessedai - 16/04/2011 08:38:52 PM 740 Views
Re: Your favorite sex scene (post here) Hopper Aes Sedai - 17/04/2011 11:24:28 PM 1010 Views
Oh that Roman erotica A Deathwatch Guard - 22/04/2011 10:14:21 PM 791 Views
I really enjoyed that. Darth_Katie - 23/04/2011 06:20:57 AM 764 Views
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