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*nods* ironclad Send a noteboard - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM
First of all, I found that sex scene absolutely atrocious. It seems to me that Tanith Lee obviously never intended to read that passage aloud because the words just sound all wrong and smashed together in a haphazard way. It doesn't flow, it doesn't drag me along with it the way a good sex scene in a book should.

That's exactly how I felt too. Trying way too hard to sound like good literature, but not sexy at all.
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This request is causing me a great deal of distress. Tom - 11/04/2011 04:12:19 PM 1061 Views
*nods* ironclad - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM 942 Views
You have to type up some samples for me, b/c so far I think your crazy. I love that paragraph. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 11:42:26 PM 286 Views
"you're", not "your". And the paragraph was awful. Tom - 12/04/2011 12:28:02 AM 744 Views
Yes, and punctuation marks go inside the quodation marks, "like so." Aeryn - 12/04/2011 05:16:55 PM 899 Views
Wait... they do? rebelaessedai - 14/04/2011 03:26:10 AM 713 Views
No they don't, at least not in my reply. Tom - 14/04/2011 05:44:50 AM 765 Views
Re: No they don't, at least not in my reply. Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:38:37 PM 700 Views
That would be wrong and ugly. Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:51:05 PM 715 Views
... *NM* Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:52:20 PM 315 Views
Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Tom - 14/04/2011 06:00:16 AM 801 Views
Re: Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:30:58 PM 779 Views
Once more into the breach Tom - 14/04/2011 05:27:37 PM 900 Views
I agree with you on some points, disagree on others. Legolas - 14/04/2011 06:57:07 PM 965 Views
Only in America Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:36:38 PM 884 Views
The ones in Illuminatus were sometimes hot, and usually pretty funny. *NM* Panorphaeon - 11/04/2011 07:34:49 PM 310 Views
I understand why you like this. rebelaessedai - 12/04/2011 02:35:37 AM 749 Views
Would one I wrote myself count? imlad - 14/04/2011 12:23:43 PM 751 Views
No. *NM* Vivien - 21/04/2011 04:35:47 AM 316 Views
I read a good one last night... by Tanith Lee! rebelaessedai - 16/04/2011 08:38:52 PM 666 Views
Re: Your favorite sex scene (post here) Hopper Aes Sedai - 17/04/2011 11:24:28 PM 929 Views
Oh that Roman erotica A Deathwatch Guard - 22/04/2011 10:14:21 PM 719 Views
I really enjoyed that. Darth_Katie - 23/04/2011 06:20:57 AM 702 Views
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