i find it distracting and it takes away from my overall enjoyment
Third person narrative question
23/02/2011 08:21:01 PM
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So it is focalised through different points of view
24/02/2011 09:34:34 AM
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Re: So it is focalised through different points of view
24/02/2011 02:30:17 PM
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It's sloppy. I can't imagine that the result is good.
24/02/2011 05:47:27 PM
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parts of Dune are written in this style
25/02/2011 03:25:38 PM
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