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Re: like anyhting else if it is done right it can be good Dark Knight Send a noteboard - 24/02/2011 07:24:00 PM
But it is very tricky and if your fiend hasn't done a lot of writing it is better to avoid it. Like in art form some of the best work is done by breaking the rules but you have to have mastered the craft and really understand why the rules are there to pull it off.


True, but to me switching POVs back and forth frequently seems lazy and is often confusing. And its hard to get into the characters because you don't get a lot of time to enjoy them.
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