It was a good idea.
I also liked that ending.
Hell, I even liked the scary deadly ninja monks.
But.
If he had taken another year to develop his characters, and taken a writing class or two, it could have been a good book. Which it isn't. And that annoys me.
I also liked that ending.
Hell, I even liked the scary deadly ninja monks.
But.
If he had taken another year to develop his characters, and taken a writing class or two, it could have been a good book. Which it isn't. And that annoys me.
From what I understand he took a few years to develop the entire book, didn't he?
He needed more.
*MySmiley*
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